It's probably a good thing Zephyr wasn't able to smell his sister's... reaction to those hornets. Otherwise that probably would've been an awkward flight home.

What a lovely catharsis this chapter.

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Nah! That would have been too awkward to ruin a moment like that. Sometimes, you need balance sexual fantasies with reality, y'know,

8469726
Thank you! I certainly wasn't bad for something I thought up on the fly.

Hope to see more :)

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I'll try! What are your thoughts on this chapter.

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Very interesting origin :)

8472807
Ok. Well, if that's all, then that's all. :P

8472917
Well it was also an interesting to see Zephyr in it

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I honestly really wanted to write him into the picture somehow. He doesn't know about her fetish, but he might one day.

8473010
He'd be freaked

Maybe you should have Fluttershy punish Zephyr with an insect sting. He's not a melissophile like she is after all.

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Fluttershy is not the type of pony to subjugate others to torture. She is more willing to hurt herself than other ponies or creatures.

Wh... why is Thorax listed as a character if he never appears?

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Well not just that but the insects in your story are the exact ones in the video. Also I do feel the schmid pain index is a little limiting being from 1 to 4. Would a system of 1 to 8 or something be more accurate?

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1 to 4 was the index used in the pain index. This video is just coincidence, imo.

nice work on all chapters out so far and looking forward to more