When Sunsets final plan in Friendship Games fails, it is left to an unexpected source to come to the rescue and secure Twilight's redemption.
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Alright here it is. By all means comment ur thoughts pls
One thing that stick out to me is the ever changing names that ends with "y" such as "Sunny" become "Sunnie" and Fluttershy become "Fluttershie"
6810260 yeh thats my bad dude.
6810260 there fixed it") Yeh was in kinda a rush when i wrote this part, so i kinda forgot to edit(facepalm)
Alright teeeeem! Day 1 and already 104 views! Also a dislike:( But hey, thats how the cookie crumbles sometimes. Oh, and 2 more subscribers, so cookies for....WindTyphoon and Rainbowcooldash:). But yeh, if u like the story, tell yur friends and raise those thumbs! ^_^ oh and comment 2 if u feel the need.
Dem favorites rolling on in!
my bad Diablo. Accidentally deleted ur comment.
......ok.....
Ahem anyways. I said. Twilight is going to hate herself so much after this.
Bad enough she tore those rifts, and and all, but she taking her anger out on the wrong person and beating her up pretty bad.
Sunset can see having to be taken to the hospital if she not rescued soon, ...uggghh she doing worst then Sunset had done before actually before.
hope there a sequel to this story.
6815899 oh don't worry. I have.....plans for Twilight my friend.
Are you uploading another chapter tonight?
6817617 I was planning on it but I hurt my neck pretty bad so it may be a few days"(
Alright guys so New part on Saturday likely. Sorry for wait. Might be Last part .
New chapter up. Comment thoughts")
Because she's Suuunseeeeet!!
6888297 So any guesses as to the stories direction? I think ull like way comes next.
6888297 lol batman;)
6888365 I think, to everyone's shock, Twilight should destroy the pendant. I don't like the whole "They stop her, everyone makes up, happily ever after cliche."
I can totally see this going south...
"We are going to stop you with this!"
Sunset holds up the pendant...and Twilight shoots it out of her hand to dust.
"Going to stop me with what?..."
Have you read my Rage and Serenity story?
nEW CHAPER SOON, STUFF HAS BEEN HECtic
Are you going to finish this story??
YOU BETTER!!
umm...if you want to...
7200195 Yep, going to update tomorrow. Real life has been painful...and I have a commitment problem lol
Well, this should be the final chapter. THANKS for all the support
I'm sorry to say not sure I like this ending, what happen to Sunset friends and are they ok?
If i remember Apple Jack was out cold and hurt, I can see Sunset getting healed by ascending but what about the others?
Poor Fluttershy was a mess as well.
Plus Sunset said Twilight's friends woudl forgive her, so does that mean the Rainbooms won't so easily?
I see Fluttershy being very afraid of human Twilight and uncomfortable with her around at times.
Rainbow being protective of her as well.
because in thsi fic, Twilight did alot worst then sunset had done when she changed.
7200195 And there you go, finished
7418573 The results will be explained further in the "epilogue" summary . It should give a rundown on how things turned out with the characters . As for that sequel u asked for awhile back, it could happen in the future.
7419306
Can't wait to read it.
7419331 Well it might be awhile, I have another story planned first before the full sized sequel to this one. Probably a story about a half changeling mercenary.( In which case I would accept a couple oc' s.) As for the aforementioned sequel, it would be the Equestrian Girls version of the Canterlot Wedding, with Twilight and the new Crystal Prep Elements as the heroes.
You realize that this is what the authors notes are for, right?