Fluttershy has tried being patient and she's tried the cute routine. But a mare has needs. She wants in your pants. And pony logic dictates that finding your fetish is the way to do it.
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This is a really interesting new insight into her, I really like how you played it.
I think this works best as a one-off, although one is intrigued about the surrounding story with Sunset. But it's probably slightly too realistic for the comedy rape plot to work repeatedly, as it does with Equestrian Fluttershy.
Good job!
You did it dude. I'm not really sure what it was but you did it, quite Excellently too I might add.
Jesus that was terrifying! As the story progressed deeper and deeper I felt this growing sense of dread and it was completely right!
Alright, insight into the thought progress of this chapter
At first it was really cute. Adorable even. til I got here...
A touch creepy but I can Kinda see what she's going for (still thinking it was cute and innocent at the time)
Alright this is gonna hit the fan... and then finally
Nope. This swiftly took a sharp turn into crazyville
Gotta say futterpriest, when I went into this i expect comedy, and, while you did definitely deliver, I did not expect the various emotional roller coasters you've given us too. Really good work there.
whoa! just wow!
A bit crazy, a bit sad. Started out sweet, but quick. Anon being happy with Flutters as his girlfriend was nice, again, very quick. I guess this was back when Sunset was evil and she messed with Anon to go out with her at the Fall Formal to break Fluttershy down as she took control of the school.
These always surprise me in the sense of why the girl isn't trying to get rid of the other girls like in Yandere Simulator, but, crazy is as crazy does I guess.
I'm gonna go with the more happy assumption that the..um...sexual encounter happened, Anon moved far, far away afterwards, and Flutters never got another crush again. Yeah, I'm good with that.
Cute...still cute... downright daw-inspiring...wait...no, no that...oh hell, passed crazy town and went right into batshit crazy-town.
Lets be perfectly honest here.
EQ Fluttershy? She's got a bit of crazy, but so far Pony Fluttershy vastly exceeds her counterpart's crazy. I mean, this is a mare who violently kidnapped Anon, tortured, repeatedly raped, and toyed with Anon all in the hope that Stockholm syndrome was his fetish.
Interesting chapter. But it got dark as hell at the end really bloody fast.
I loved the tone of the story. I prolly knew from that alone that something wasnt right. But I ignored it.
Course I couldnt stop grinning through the whole thing.
And that ending, was a nice twist.
My thoughts where leaning more toward murder/suicide then rape.
But rape is good too.
Ok, was not expecting Yandere simulator Fluttershy. Not saying I didn't like, just unexpected.
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I think it's a rape-suicide. Maybe a rape-murder-suicide.
Holy fuck this was great! This started off so sweet and innocent like, then it became something more...
Deliciously dark~
I approve Priest, damn good show!
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What's with the quote marks at the start of paragraphs?
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(out of context on purpose)
This was beautiful.
I cried.
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7920413 Matey! The world always needs people like you. Never forget that. *Salute/teardrop*
goddamn! this is the story everybody deserves!
Holy freaking yander-shy.
Yandereshy 100%!
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Anon kinda deserves it.
7928651 I think it was referring more to the dreams she has of being with him and then waking up, this time it's not a dream and she won't be pulled away from him by opening her eyes. Although you could always look at it whichever way you interpret it.
Well. This went from sweet and typical to suddenly creepy. I approve. I could kinda feel something was gonna change. Maybe I've just grown too used to the story to not expect "nice things" to go crazy. Or maybe there's not much point in this story otherwise if it didn't have a twist. I like that creepy feeling.
Me during this chapter:
"Well this is uncharacteristically cute."
"Yay, Fluttershy gets the guy."
"Oh, hey. I just noticed open quotes. Monologues."
"Wait a minute..."
"Oh please tell me- *sigh* Dammit Fluttershy."
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The open quotation marks show that a speaker is still speaking at the end of a paragraph. This whole chapter is a monologue from Fluttershy.
Yep....I knew this chapter was to innocent......Saw that coming....
goddamnit fluttershy
It would be interesting to see what happens next, but that's a story for another time
Well that got dark fast.
Damn. Dark and.... Sweet. Good job!
Flutters, literally just ask him out again. If you're metal enough to tie up Anon (your love), then you're metal enough to fuck that Sunset bitch up.
This chapter alone deserves a whole story arc about this! I honestly expected a plot twist that either anon was a pony here or this anon later became the other anon
Holy shit. That was good.
Not bad, great ending!
There was two endings playing in my head: that ending or her still being her shy self not doing that. Was it good? Yes
Please make a full story off of this chapter.
Pretty creepy. Gotta say though, I'm having trouble pinning down the timeline. It's after Twilight transferred from Crystal Prep but before Sunset stopped being a douche?
Or is it just an AU Equestria Girls?
8175528 It's most likely an alternate universe.
That was really cute, right until the end.
Guau