Fluttershy has tried being patient and she's tried the cute routine. But a mare has needs. She wants in your pants. And pony logic dictates that finding your fetish is the way to do it.
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Really?
FUCKING really, Flutterpriest?
A great storyline, a disturbing character development, for what? THIS!?
I'm disappointed, unsub.
Still see the incomplete tag....
It's not done yet.
That was...
Anticlimatic. I suppose I should have been expecting it and I guess it is kind of funny, but I really was enjoying the whole horror aspect you had going and was hoping you'd set this up as an alternate timeline that an Anon perceived in his timeline in dreams where Fluttershy hadn't gone full yandere mode. This was just...meh. A solid meh at that-not in a good way, but so meh that it is the meh of mehs.
Honestly, if you were going to end the series I would have just expected Anon to kill himself only for Fluttershy to show up soon afterward in the Afterlife and through of the cough-bullshit-cough powers of
Rainbow Laser of Doomfriendship he's pulled back to life where Celestia reveals that this is his hell for being an asshole on Earth.Then again, this is marked as incomplete. There may be hope for this arc yet.
Dat twist , man this arc was on the edge of your seat stuff
Disappointing ending.
Like really disappointing, 3/10 bad.
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I think we all saw that coming.
Yeah, gotta agree with everyone here. I know you've got a theme going and everything, but this was just uninspired.
Six chapters ago I said I'd lose my shit if this was the climax (no pun intended) of the arc, and I'm losing my shit! I'm gonna go flip a table now.
Fucking beautiful... I wanna see that machine.
LOL, expected this, nice job man. XD
This could use a rewrite for clarification.
Extra word?
Extra word or an attempt at a double negative?
Loved the twist I lol'd
One of the few times horror has so quickly led to me laughing this hard. Seriously, playing the fucking long game with this arc, this is a great addition to this series. I really lack the words to convey the feeling of "expectations met" that this arc finished on. 9 out of 10, only because I expected this to last all of October, and now I must hope for something more to tickle my horror fancy.
So....conjugal visits are out of the question?
You know... I knew it was coming, and in a way I actually hoped it didn't, but at the same time I knew it could only end this way. I have mixed feelings right now...
Seriously anon needs to get a hidden camera or a mic or something Jesus christ
hahahaha hurray!!
and that's why i start to hade this fucking story!
Expected it, still laugh as hard as youd expect
Bait and switch don e right
7645145 Wow you expected this story to be a masterpiece or some shit? It's literally not meant to be taken seriously.
All I could imagine during this entire story arc was what I'd do if I were in Anon's place. Getting free, escaping Harry in the everfree, grabbing a stick, then beating fluttershy to death with said stick. Honestly, you made me feel for Anon. Great job! Seriously. It takes some work to make me feel for Anon.
7646438 I don't think that would help. In this Lil universe of hell Flutterbutter is so loved that literally no one would believe him if he did have a recording of audio or video. They would just say he made it up.
Excellent ending, I can rest now : )
This is my favorite arc.
you don't add for in that sentence it should be:That you want to be with me forever
I am amazed, but also kinda disappointed at that ending...
Heck just S.O.S. to Luna in your nightmares lol
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Just out of curiosity, whose dreams do you think Luna can enter and what can she do while there?
This was a hell of an intense arc. I get what you wanted to go for with the ending, keeping with the overall theme of being comedically batshit, but this just made it anticlimactic in a rather disappointing way in my opinion. There could be so many different ways to end this: having Fluttershy succeed, having Anon kill her, hell I could see it end up initially being a fetish guess but Flutters ends up getting so into it she realizes that it was *her* fetish. It could actually have been his fetish. Flutters could be caught because this was in the middle of fucking town. So many ways!
Anticlimax aside, I’ll still read because you’re a funny guy/gal and look forward to more insanity.