Fluttershy has tried being patient and she's tried the cute routine. But a mare has needs. She wants in your pants. And pony logic dictates that finding your fetish is the way to do it.
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I like this arc, but I'm worried Anon will do the soap-standard mushy thing of going back to the child despite who the mother is, and I hope he has stronger resolve than that. Either way, Redheart's return has not disappointed. Though it's weird to read a chapter that doesn't contain three knocks.
There's only so evil one person can be.
At least, that's what I thought until this. Fuckin' Fluttershy.
I'm happy to see this arc with Redheart again and I do have the same concern as forbloodysummer. Is it bad that this version of Fluttershy just scares the everloving crap out of me?
That's all I'm asking for. I don't mind short chapters as long as they're consistently out here, and you've been doing that fine. I do hope you ramp it up in freakiness though, I think I may have accidentally become desensitized...
Damn... Fluttershy's a dick D: evil af ;w;
But this is good~ Good work!
The upside is, now Anon might marry Redheart. Then he'd be protected from hair-whip weddings (dang, I would love to see ponies whipping Anon with their hair to force him down the isle).
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well, she could go deeper
8291343 How so?
Because she literally MADE A CHILD to get Anon. What'll happen to them once/if the plan fails?
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she threatens to abort the child if he doesn't come around?
8291371
that is even worse
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i agree, cause based on anon's reaction about this info i think that would force his hand
8291582
easy way out would be marrying both Redheart and Flutters
I really like this series. All the one shots, and the story arcs.
This one is no exception.
I can't wait to see were this will go and how it will end. I could see it going in a dark and sad direction, or even a really happy ending. Based on some of the other stories I can see it also ending in a bizarre random way too. Fluttershy fakes giving birth and just walks around with a watermelon with a sharpy smiley face on it, and all the other ponies simply accept it as Anon's and Fluttershy's child.
I don't know if its because i'm really tired but this line felt clunky to me
.
Maybe its just
that is getting me. I get the meaning behind it, it just doesn't sound right. Again I could be just really tired.
Please never stop writing!
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no way man, you threatened my child, beat down time!
aww shit, this is so depressing. Anon please don't go back to ponyville because you want to see your child.
Restart? Fuck that, how about "Revenge".
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Ok now I feel like a dick. Sorry red heart. But I'm still with the thought on kill fluttershy though at this rate. Guess fetishes are not bad but what she's doing is something my ex wife did to me once and all the hell I went through just to clear my name. So yeah
I know what it's like to be drugged to sleep and then have yourself raped, my ex wife did it to me before. Sense I don't really want to relive the past I'll just say this. I don't know if the laws on equestria are like the ones here in the USA but trying to prove that the child was not conceived through the normal method but through rape instead he will be going through hell just because of that fact.
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Holy hell
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It’s because it should be forcibly. The reason why you most likely had difficulty recognising the error is because Americans tend to make this sort of error more than any other English speaking country. You know it’s wrong but have difficulty pinpointing it due to how American pop culture spreads and reinforces acceptance of piss poor English in the form of Ebonics, Spanglish, and other créole languages which often have simplified and/or inconsistent grammar. The ur‐example of this might be the phrase “real cool”, where the ‐ly suffix is dropped because of its being spread throughout pop culture featuring it, leading to generations of already vapid valley girls sounding even less intelligent than usual.
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Honestly, I actually like this Anon fic. Redheart x Anon, as you've portrayed it, is definitely a cute ship, and these chapters with Redheart are my favourite.
I get what "fly" means in this context, but other than chartered hot air balloon flights between Ponyville and Yakyakistan, does anyone think that the pony world has some form of civil aviation? Could one theoretically hop on a short flight between Canterlot and Ponyville or a medium-haul flight between Canterlot and Crystal City?
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My guess is less going back to the child and going back to get them. It’s not like it’d be healthy to raise a child with a mother like that, either alone or with both of them. He might feel guilty leaving them with her, so my guess is going back, ponynap the kid, then flee with Redheart to raise them as their own, assuming things go to plan, which it most certainly won’t.