Fluttershy has tried being patient and she's tried the cute routine. But a mare has needs. She wants in your pants. And pony logic dictates that finding your fetish is the way to do it.
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Hmm... this seemed kinda innocent-ish...
Uh oh, does that mean next chapter will be a doozy?
Probably...
Strap ons!
Nice job.
Aww, how sweet
Expand on that! Lets see something that is not a third-rate porno knock off.
7741206 yeah, me too
Yes! Love this chapter!
I would have expected him to pretend that he was asexual just to get fluttershy to stop with the damned guesses lol
Fluttershy has a good side?
Good luck with that.
Well, she is part of a group that spreads friendship at least. I mean, yeah they have brainwashing and mind altering spells in their repertoire with noone batting an eye on them, but still.
Also, she's in a position that can be abused for benefits.
Ah, if only she could strap one of those on.
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It's a trap
Does she have a good side?
oh god, the feels at the end! i wept many a manly tears
I smell an arc, and it will end in a fine and pleasant misery.
Every time Flutters doesn't go nuts with the fetish I remember her chapter, and how this is just a long running tragedy for her.
Kind of makes me wish something good would happen for the girl.
Then I remember who writes this and realize that nothing good will ever happen.
Darn, sometimes I just feel so sorry for her. (especially at the dream sequence with Luna)
I liked this one. I had a bad day, and the funny, more lighthearted chapter made ne feel good. Great job, and thanks for the mood lift.
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OHMYGAWD I want this to exist as a story!
7750034 Sorry, probably half asleep at the time.
Dammit, Anon! You could have ended this with the minimum of hurt feelings!
Second paragraph, third sentence:
Should add "do" after to, there for it reads "you deserve to do something a little more...
Second paragraph, seventh sentence:
I think you were going for "If you neglect it," because just saying neglected in that format reads wonky.
Third paragraph, first sentence:
The repetition of "sit" is kinda goofy, I'd look into changing one of them up. Say, "You get up and sit", or "You sit up and settle at". Just something to break up that word repetition.
That's all I really saw, feel free to delete this message after you've looked at it.
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fixed. And I don't delete correction comments. I live with my terrible editing shame
Also, how have we had over a hundred chapters and not reached strap ons yet?
NOW I'm wondering if in the EG world human-shy is constantly trying to seduce an Anon-Pony.
Honestly, the last chapter should be good nature. That seems like thats what Anon rly wants.
>Looks through chapter lists
>Fails to see something.
MILFs.
Anon clearly isn't into anything to do with babies, so CLEARLY he wants an older, experienced partner.
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This was directly called out as his fetish by one of his internal monologues in a chapter. Of course, that was like, two universes ago, but still! We will probably never see it because of that