• Member Since 14th Jun, 2014
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ponygirl825


I am a girl in my teens, I fell in love with the show a few years ago when I saw my little sister watching it. I write and draw creations inspired by the show.

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Is she a unicorn? No. But is she magic? Absolutely. After Princess Twilight is asked by a young earth pony to turn her into a unicorn so she could learn magic, Twilight, with the help of Celestia, sends her to a place where she can finally learn magic, but she doesn't exactly fit in. In fact there are quite a few differences between ponies and humans. She tries to do well, but being constantly teased and harassed doesn't make it easy.

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Chapters (8)
Comments ( 20 )

Tracking this! I love Harry Potter crossovers!! :pinkiehappy:

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I'm so glad! This is only my second story, I hope you and everyone else likes it so far! :twilightblush:

Wow this story is great, I don't tend to read many of the stories on this website but for some reason this one caught my eye! I think everything is done well so far and I don't have any criticisms other than the chapters could be made a little longer, I really hope you continue with this and don't let a great idea die!

Well, congratulations. You got me to read a Harry Potter story. This is literally the first one I ever read, including the actual Rowling books. Keep it up.

Well, the first chapter was a bit rushed, but if it's a prologue, it is acceptable. Remember to put spacing in the dialogue, each time a new character start speeking, you are supposed to start a new paragraphe.
And try to make your chapter longer.

Well, five chapter later... I like it.
But it could be more detailled. You could spend more time on each moment; so far you are mostly jumping from one to another, rushing things.

Keep working, keep writting, it can just get better and better :raritywink:

Oh my god my sides! Draco getting turned into a pony is a rich, and well deserved revenge for the dick head. This chapter was done very well and has much improvement from the older chapters and everything flows together nicely. Some of the plot points while very well done, could use a bit more fleshing out in some areas and Hue could have a bit more interaction with professors and such outside of when she is around the main HP cast. Thanks for the chapter!

Although in the first 6 books it is easy to hate snape, at least he knows an amazing potion when he sees one.

It's about time someone made a Harry Potter/MLP crossover!!!!

Well, that was a fast (and interesting) introduction!

Hahahaha! That joke about Draco's dad was really funny!

Great story, keep it up.:twilightsmile:

Guess being a pony for awhile could teach even Draco to be a decent character for once! I'm enjoying how this story is coming together and your writing skills are improving with every chapter! Keep up the good work :)

Your writing is getting better and better to me, but still a bit rushed. Not to say it's bad, I love this a lot! :heart:

finally got around to reading this, was killing me until i got the chance. Everything is coming together nicely, writing is improving things are detailed well! Keep up the good work!

#mylittlemalfoy now if only hue could turn all of the rest of slytherin (including Snape) into ponies forever!

and i think it would be cool if you brought discord into this somehow!

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I'll see what I can do! This is only the fourth year and I'm hoping to do some sequels, so maybe year five?

awww why cancelled? it was so good!

WTF?! REEEEEEEEEEE :twilightangry2:

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