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Behind the Curtain

Rara and A.J. had been friends for years until they lost touch. When Rara visits Ponyville, Applejack gets a chance to realize who she wants to be in Rara's life, and hopes that Rara doesn't hate her for it...

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p61blkwidow

p61blkwidow #1 · Mar 24th, 2016 · · ·

very nice, this should prove to be a very interesting story. the next chapter is well worth the wait!well done!

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #2 · Mar 24th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Very sweet and well written.

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Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #6 · Sep 12th, 2017 · · ·

This is a very sweet story! I liked the tension you built up for Applejack. She is so charming when she gets flustered! Your portrayal of Rara was good, as well, as she comes across as a concerned and caring friend. Good work!