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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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Magic is fickle; and sometimes it goes wrong, terribly wrong. What would it be like, to spend your life as a flightless Pegasus, never able to fly, while unable to use any of the Earth Pony’s inherited strength.

Incidentally, I now have the means to change this fate. If you can’t use my wings, you would trade them.

This is the first adventure in the line of many more to come. All explaining the process; Step by Step.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Huh

It was ok?

I am at a loss.

Thumbs up for confusing my literary senses!

6718014 Just curious, exactly what was confusing you here?
It may be a new idea, from one perspective, from the other, I have a story like it.

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The story made perfect sense.

The writing technique did not make sense, but somehow still felt well written.

I feel compelled to point out that when a person has a story idea, she is not obligated to rush the first chapter into publication.

6718576 Then I managed what was most important?
6718605 Wait, I am not obligated to have the story published at the instant of initial inspiration?
Maybe that is why I have not published it until now.
On a related note, I do have numerous stories that are not yet published.

Ps: and now I feel as if I need to write a story about this particular Rarity before me. :raritystarry:

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Then I managed what was most important?

Yes.

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Well let's see here, then. I had to go through two full pages of your stories before I could find one that was complete. That means that of the last twenty five stories you've published, none of them are done, and most of them are a single chapter and don't seem like they're ever going to be completed. My point is that you might benefit from waiting until you have more of a story written or even the entire thing completed before putting it up. You don't have to publish it all at once, but maybe have it at least planned out so that the story doesn't sit and go nowhere.

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