um...that was anticlimactic

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i agree

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could have been worse... could have been a cliffhanger as for me i have no objections to this chapter

hope next part comes soon, also hope Andrew punches Celestia in the face for being an idiot.

Noooooooooo!!!

HE IS BUCKING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fucking awesome book I already love it!! I will be waiting do the next chapter please let me know on your progress

More?

Is this story dead?

I really want to read the next chapter

It seems as though this story is dead, but it wasnt bad while it lasted.

Oh well, i guess. Would have been nice to see more, but such is life.

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I can only agree with you
Tho more and more stories end up dead lately so it comes as no surprise to be honest

Pls continue this thing

I have to ask when are you going to have a new chapter out mister for fight till ghe end. If you busy it ok i get what to know.

Please continue I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I think something might have happened to gim je has not been on the website in more than a year

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

DAMIT CELESTIA YOU KILLED HIM!!!!!!!!!!

Please update soon

Considering when the author was Last on this site I think it is safe to to say that, unfortunately this story is dead.

No updates?

Need more

Last seen over 3 years ago..... yeah, story is dead. Shame too, seems like an interesting start given the preface, but I refuse to read dead stories.

How disappointing. I really enjoyed this story. To see it die like this is truly a shame.

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