A human who gets sent to equestria by an unknown source, develops not only magic, but other powers that awaken during battles. He also has one of the strongest entities living inside of him. How will he control all these powers? Who knows.
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All of Pineville of course, a village of pines wonderful thing this is an error in the story if you can't tell
7259421 Thank you for pointing that out. I'll fix that.
Uuuuugh. Just reading this in its current form is gradually burning away bits of my I.Q. as I continue. Seriously, no offense, but you really should start thinking about getting an editor and descriptor, or you need to take your time while typing in your stories.
I am enjoying the concept of this, but my advice is this: Slow the fuck down, check for any grammar errors, run-on sentences, paragraph errors, et cetera, then publish your chapters.
I apologize if I am sounding rude, but I like to keep my intelligence somewhat stable here. I don't want to go .
so what happen next chapter?
7259513 I'll try to find an editor, but I just don't feel comfortable asking for one. I don't wanna bug someone ya know. But hey I appreciate you telling me, and your not being rude at all. I'll it take slow next time, look through the story, and fix the errors. So like I said thank you for telling me, and sorry for the errors.
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Good to hear. But if you do need some help with proofreading and editing alongside with you, I might point out a couple of users here that may help you out that doesn't really slack around.
7259605 That would be great help if you could point out to some. That's if you don't mind. I don't wanna bug you for looking for editors. I mean I should be doing that ya know.
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Tatsurou. He is a good proofreader.
7259635 I have seen quite a few misspellings and little errors now and then, but I get what you're telling in the story, so if I was you I'd take some help and get better so good luck my friend.
Kidney shots are illegal in boxing. Any strike to the back is.
7260974 I know that, but hey this a story. Anything can happen in a story, am I right?
7262876 Yes, but any real boxer respects the rules of his trade unless he's a dirty boxer in witch case you should throw in some rabbit punched as well. They'll take a fucker down real quick.
>>When is the next update?
Why the fuck doesn't he ask where his kid is at!?
7948964 because celestia said she would get someone to look after him after andrew asked celestia to have someone watch him
Its funny what rushing and autocorrect can do am i right?
Oh yes, Princess Luan, My favorite.
The story is fun and all, but there are some redundancies (is this right?)
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