A human who gets sent to equestria by an unknown source, develops not only magic, but other powers that awaken during battles. He also has one of the strongest entities living inside of him. How will he control all these powers? Who knows.
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Kurama what how wh- i have SO many questions
nartuo refs for the win now you got me all fired up. #notsorry but seriously keep up the good work GB
8105970 You got questions, I got answers, and thanks. I try my damn hardest to making the chapters sound good.
8106694 and it shows while short the quality is quite good if i do say so myself
8107685 Thanks for telling me. I appreciate that.
You ass a cliffhanger good job but I'm still mad
8107911 Thanks, and sorry.
8107687 i speak nothing but the truth... or i try to at least and you are welcome
Why is there no plot synopsis?
8111802 There will be one. I'm going to add it later on. Thank you for reminding me about that. I almost forgot to add that in.
Description mothafucka! Do you have it?!
the worst theory I have ever heard ಠ_ಠ be ashamed
tf... how do you think they raise the sun and moon I mean yeah the moon is only half the size of our planet but our planet isn't even half the size of the sun ◉_◉ so it would take a GOD to move the sun
( so get that bullshit outa here) ಠ╭╮ಠ honestly a good and surprising chapter though kurama wouldn't act like that you have his whole character wrong FIIIIXXX ITTTTT or we gonna fight bro (ง ° ل͜ °)ง(ง ° ل͜ °)ง(ง ° ل͜ °)ง
8114332 Hey I ain't the best at story making. It's my first time making a story. Trust me when I say I try, I mean it. Anyways thanks for the feedback, I'll TRY and fix everything.
I can't believe they used it on them. WTF!
>>Mister
I'm not trying to say your a terrible writer (way better than me) its a good story with a unidentified plot but its not a must fix (that theory is though) but this is definitely one of the better story's I've seen on this site not too many good ones like out there this is the kind of story i would read the second i see its updated (wish it was updated more often) and maybe try to make even longer chapters :D
8115027 Your right about the theory, I'll fix it up once I get the time to do so. Heh, I will try and make the stories longer for you guys to enjoy and maybe update frequently, but no promises.
Ok, let's just throw Kurama in this because of reasons? I mean I liked the story as it was but hey if it's the direction you wanna go then you, do you. I will continue to read to see how it goes.
Cliche of having a spirit it the main character much bUT kurama and he has the sharingan and rinnegan really wow serious fire power
more pls
DDDDD: u put the story onPAUSE?!?!??!!??!?!?!?!?!?!? bro wtf
8186193 Reason why is because I've been busy studying for finals. I've been working on the next chapter for only a bit, and then once I'm done with the chapter I gotta go through to find any errors, so it's gonna take awhile.
8187512 i hate it when there is a long pause in the end of the chapter there could be words there
8187692 Aha, my bad. I tend to do that when I finish up the chapters.
8187698 its fine you can write however you like i was just stating it would be more preductive to actually put words there to help progress the story
>>Mister
:v
Oh Tia is so gettin a pimp slap.
Or