Twilight Sparkle's friends couldn't have picked a worse time to be away if they tried! The Crystal Heart has gone missing, and with the rest of the mane six in Griffonstone, it's up to Princesses Twilight, Cadance, Luna and Celestia to find it!
Though despite the almost apocalyptic level of danger, the other princesses don't seem to be taking the mission seriously. Is something wrong with them? Have they been mind controlled? Is Twilight about to crash into a tree if she doesn't stop thinking about this and start looking where she's going?
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So...what did they do with the crystals they found?
There are some grammar errors, and you forgot to mark the story as complete, but all in all this is a pretty good romp.
6513162 Good question XD I guess they would've had to leave them there because it'd be too much to carry, and by the time they sent anyone back to do anything with them, if they did send anyone back, the dragon would've taken them and left. Probably should've made the story longer, I think that's the reason there's so many gaps, I just didn't give it enough time.
6513666 Yeah, that was pretty silly of me, sorry :P I'm not sure why I'd forget something that obvious.
Glad you liked it though, thanks for the comment x3
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Thy shall not trust the cleaning staff!
6515566 Indeed XD That's the moral of the story XD Never trust the cleaning staff XD
6518400 Thanks :3 The whole thing just sort of didn't go to plan but oh well. There'll be another chance in a few weeks.
Trixie again next, and Gold Star and Twilight as well, the whole party :3 It'll be a sequel to a sequel so hopefully people will actually read the thing but still I think it's worth it, even if it just gets 20 views or something. It's based on an idea that's not that original, but I'm putting a twist on it, so hopefully I can pull it off well enough for people to see past the fact it's sort of been done before.
I've seen some other people get pretty brutally shot down for something minor like having an alicorn OC or parodying a popular fanfiction so hopefully that won't happen to me for using an idea that's been sort of done before XD
The schedule in my head is Trixie, Scootaloo, Chrysalis for the next three - oops you didn't see that last one, hehe ;) But the Trixie one as usual will be multiple chapters, so it will be going for a few weeks :3
Thanks for regularly commenting by the way, it really helps having feedback, and just knowing that someone is actually reading and enjoying the stuff I make :3