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Nein

Nein #1 · Oct 18th, 2015 · · ·

Nicely written. I enjoyed it!
I found two typos, maybe you can fix them:

"We have quite the selection of mares, and stallion that are more than capable of handling all your needs.

stallions

enough to make you realize that she could control you’re breathing right now

your
While the second sentence isn't technically wrong, it sounds werid if you use you're.

LookingForClop #2 · Oct 19th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Neat story!

Didn't like the hardcore bondage going on.

But I like the brothel and batponies!

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