• Member Since 10th Aug, 2015
  • offline last seen Jul 19th, 2018

Omegawolfben


Hello my name is Ben I have been a Brony for a good 5 or so months and have done some Alpha and Omega fanfic on fanfiction and now think on doing some MLP storys

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Scootaloo now has three mothers Princess Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Rainbow Dash who lover her very much but what happens when she discovers she has a younger brother on the way and she thinks her nightmare will actually come true ?

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 5 )

A for effort. It didn't catch me as of yet, but I'm confident it'll only get better. Maybe a little bit longer chapters. Please?

Promising premise, pining for punctuation. :twilightsmile:

The chapter is good maybe if we saw scoots dream and fears about her being alone can build the part of her character of her being afraid of getting a new family member or just her mothers leaving her alone again but what do I know all I'm good for is ideas and bad puns.

Oh my g.o.s.h to cute

I may come back to this at a later date. I felt like my head was going to burst with all the editing issues. For example, entire first paragraph is a run-on-sentence. So please edit and fix then I will be happy to reread

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