• Member Since 10th Aug, 2015
  • offline last seen Jul 19th, 2018


Hello my name is Ben I have been a Brony for a good 5 or so months and have done some Alpha and Omega fanfic on fanfiction and now think on doing some MLP storys


Scootaloo now has three mothers Princess Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Rainbow Dash who lover her very much but what happens when she discovers she has a younger brother on the way and she thinks her nightmare will actually come true ?

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A for effort. It didn't catch me as of yet, but I'm confident it'll only get better. Maybe a little bit longer chapters. Please?

Promising premise, pining for punctuation. :twilightsmile:

The chapter is good maybe if we saw scoots dream and fears about her being alone can build the part of her character of her being afraid of getting a new family member or just her mothers leaving her alone again but what do I know all I'm good for is ideas and bad puns.

Oh my g.o.s.h to cute

I may come back to this at a later date. I felt like my head was going to burst with all the editing issues. For example, entire first paragraph is a run-on-sentence. So please edit and fix then I will be happy to reread

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