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Just one thing going wrong can spiral you into a horrible place, something that Soarin learned firsthand during a Wonderbolts show. One minute he was flying and the next, his world went dark. He's left bedridden and comatose, aware of his surroundings but without a way to respond to them.

Left in the darkness, he can only listen to the pony he loves.


Trigger Warning: Mentions of blood and physical injuries.

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Comments ( 17 )

How do you not have a huge following already?! This was amazingly made for a first fic! :pinkiegasp:

... I think I might need a hug now... :pinkiesad2:

OHHH IM SORRY FOR WHAT I AM ABOUT TO DO BUT... YOU HAD TO SAY WAKE ME UP

Feeling my way through the darkness
Guided by a beating heart
I can't tell where the journey will end
But I know where to start
They tell me I'm too young to understand
They say I'm caught up in a dream
Well life will pass me by if I don't open up my eyes
Well that's fine by me

So wake me up when it's all over
When I'm wiser and I'm older
All this time I was finding myself
And I didn't know I was lost

So wake me up when it's all over
When I'm wiser and I'm older
All this time I was finding myself
And I didn't know I was lost

WAKE ME UP INSIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6363041 Thank you for the kind words! That wasn't a comment I expected to get at all on something that only took about one or two hours to write, so it makes me happy!

A very sweet piece of work, and pretty well written. I enjoyed it. I didn't see a single spelling error either. :twilightsmile:

Absolutely gorgeous. Very, very touching. Very well done.

6363549

You're my hero for posting that.:pinkiehappy::eeyup:

6369055 OMG IM SOMEBODYS HERO :O *has a heart attack*

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CANT WAKE UP

6683496
shh.... it will be ok

6595464 SAVE ME FROM THE NOTHING I'VE BECOME!!!!

That's it? What happens next?! You left me at a cliff hanger!!!!!!
(My way of saying that this was an amazing story)

Awww, what a touching story. Good work! :fluttershysad:

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