Just one thing going wrong can spiral you into a horrible place, something that Soarin learned firsthand during a Wonderbolts show. One minute he was flying and the next, his world went dark. He's left bedridden and comatose, aware of his surroundings but without a way to respond to them.
Left in the darkness, he can only listen to the pony he loves.
Trigger Warning: Mentions of blood and physical injuries.
How do you not have a huge following already?! This was amazingly made for a first fic!
... I think I might need a hug now...
OHHH IM SORRY FOR WHAT I AM ABOUT TO DO BUT... YOU HAD TO SAY WAKE ME UP
Feeling my way through the darkness
Guided by a beating heart
I can't tell where the journey will end
But I know where to start
They tell me I'm too young to understand
They say I'm caught up in a dream
Well life will pass me by if I don't open up my eyes
Well that's fine by me
So wake me up when it's all over
When I'm wiser and I'm older
All this time I was finding myself
And I didn't know I was lost
So wake me up when it's all over
When I'm wiser and I'm older
All this time I was finding myself
And I didn't know I was lost
WAKE ME UP INSIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6363041 Thank you for the kind words! That wasn't a comment I expected to get at all on something that only took about one or two hours to write, so it makes me happy!
A very sweet piece of work, and pretty well written. I enjoyed it. I didn't see a single spelling error either.
Absolutely gorgeous. Very, very touching. Very well done.
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You're my hero for posting that.
6369055 OMG IM SOMEBODYS HERO :O *has a heart attack*
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CANT WAKE UP
6363081 *hugs mernin*
6683470 *hugs back, sniffling*
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shh.... it will be ok
6595464 SAVE ME FROM THE NOTHING I'VE BECOME!!!!
6363041 first fic?? Whaaaa?
That's it? What happens next?! You left me at a cliff hanger!!!!!!
(My way of saying that this was an amazing story)
Awww, what a touching story. Good work!