• Member Since 14th Aug, 2015
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theomegabrony


I internally scream what the Buck at least twenty times a day.

Comments ( 5 )

A good setup, but perhaps a bit short on the action. A few grammar issues too.

Well, it was a good story right in the beginning and toward the end. Of couse there were some grammar issue. If you read your story again I'm pretty sure you'll notice Then there that one big issue with this story, one big issue and that is....

Your dream should have lasted longer.:rainbowkiss:

This belongs in a YGS episode. Still pretty cute though. :rainbowwild:

7295414 yes it was I don't often remember my dreams but that one stuck. :twilightblush:

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