Chrysalis and the last of her loyal changlings have taken refuge in a celestia forsaken corner of the desert . Celestia shows up and offers redemption for all but Chrysalis won't have any of it. So Celestia Summons the power of her sun to convince her of the error of her ways.
At the request of a few readers I added an alt ending thats a bit harsher on Chrysalis
This was justy a short thing I thought up it sounded goot in my head so I typed it out. Sorry this is not edited so any input would be appriciated.
Chapters (2)
This story perfectly sums up my fear and distrust of Celestia. Because really, what stops her?
8100782 This is not the original ending for this story I debated back and fourth on it but the other ending was a bit darker. Celestia litterly Dragging Chrysalys's soul to Tartarus.
I've noticed several thumbs down for this story which is fine everyone is entitled to their opinion but if you could leave me a comment so I know what I need to work on so I can improve my writing I would appriciate it.
8101853 I'd have liked to see the other ending. Curses!
I up-voted this story, because it is quite good. It just shows what 'Tia is capable of.
8101930 maybe I'll add it as an alternate ending
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
8107470 I have been told that some people don't like violence or the threat of violence from Celestia. I kind of like thinking about Celestia's past what she would have in her life literly thousands of years if not millions she could have seen and done so many things it boggles the mind. She could have worn so many hats Warrior, Priate, Begger, Courtisan, Adventurer what would you do with eternity ?