one day AppleCade, FlutterBaker, Fencer, Rainbow Racer, Candy Star, and Pinkie Guy came across AppleJack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash,Twilight Sparkel, and Pinke Pie.
Everything was going fine until one day everything went wrong!
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AppleCade_The_Earth_Pony
AppleCade is an OC, irl I'm basicall Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Derpy, all mixed together. Also don't make me angry or else bad things! I am Pinkamena most of the time so don't bother me
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Literally who.
6186562 OC's that me my cousins and my friend made I know they sound dumb but hey I am
Any more questions? I'm happy to answer them
so yah
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You know that saying "If you have nothing nice to say, say nothing at all"?...
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The only real good thing I can say about this that it was short. Even then, that's kinda bad because I just wanted it to be over. You give no context or history of who these OCs are, you make the Mane 6 way out of character and kill crazy (Except for Applejack, who you just made into a complete wimp. I can understand Fluttershy doing that, but Applejack would just fight back) and there are so many spelling and grammatical errors it makes me wonder how this was ever approved.
6187105 I take 0 offence to this because I have had this happen to me before because I get bullied in school by my own friends for being a brony but at this point I am handle any kind of hate...I mean in pretty used to it.
Also when I rush to get something done i make mistakes that's why I misspelled a lot of stuff so ya know but anyway thanks for telling me ^_^ and I take no offence to anything I just use the to learn from my mistakes
Oh yah
P.S. if you ever meet me irl and I look mad...run because I'm Pinkamena...well I'm Pinkamena almost all the time so look out if you ever meet me irl
6187105 Also I have no idea how it got approved either I accdently clicked it I thought it was my other one >_>
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To make this idea even work, you need to either write a prequel or chapters that explain who these ocs are.
By the way 6187105 is NOT trying to offend you. He is trying to HELP you.
6187589 I will write about my OC's so you can look for that when I make it. And I was saying I take no offence to anything because I'm used to it ^_^
6187340 uhmm what?
6187699 I'm legitimately unimpressed with what is here before me.
First off, who are these OC's of yours? Where did they come from? Do they look the same as the official Main 6, are they just Rule 63's of them? Also, incorporating famous horror fics into this was unnecessary and really made me not like this. I say look at many, many works from many, many other people, and learn from them. Only then should you consider making another fic.
6187689 and I'm saying that he's not trying to insult you
6187728 I Will make backstories for my OC's okay? And how do I show you what they look like? (I'm not awnswering every question you asked)
6187728 also this wasn't even spoused to go up I thought it was a different one I will get rid of it as soon as my Internet works better (its really bad right now(
O.O......da.....fuk.....bruh.....
still interesting
ok then
At least nether won
this story may be short, buts kinda good
Hey man,
I'm an up and coming author on here too. In fact you the other day added my first story to your fav list. I do agree with everyone that the story was very short, and the character don't have any back story.
however.
I liked it
Ever need help with anything then just PM me.
6192148 okay and thanks ^_^