• Member Since 24th Jun, 2015
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the creed


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Percy Jackson has woken up in a place called ponyville. he's a pony now. a blank flank. he's on a search for his cutie mark and a way back to his word

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he's on a search for his cutie mark and a way back to his word

and a way back to his word

I'm sorry, but your spelling and grammar is just horrible. Your two chapters are pretty much the length of one average chapter. I could go on, but I won't. It's self-explanatory.

Dude a u beat me to the punch b up it to teen with gore and i know all the first book series

Less grammar please.

I would try to give you some pointers but, the central idea and concept is bad. So, I'm going to have to ban you,

6134763 Why? Did Creed do something illegal?

6134860 Yes, he took away my ability to even.

Percy would have known what a pegasus is. That isn't even my biggest complaint, but I don't want to say more in case I hurt your feelings.

Why did you cancel it? Can't take criticism?

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