this is my first story here, so go at it, I welcome advice and suggestions

I liked it. I'll admit that I'm not one to look too closely into grammar and spelling, but from what I read, nice job!

I won't hate on it.its not like I could do better.

Suddenly she feels his member start to pulse and throb inside her. She shakes her head pleading for him not to, but it's too late. The boar releases his cum in to her and continues to do so for a couple of minutes.

Fun Fact: a pig's orgasm lasts for about 30 minutes.

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I actually didnt know that but adds to it

Wow. I never thought I would say this, but those three are a bunch of d***s. Also, you're going to need a very good editor.

What the hick i just reed