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Arreis Of Avalon


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What is home? And what is love? It took Luna some time, but she knows now.

Written for The Competitive Writers Guild . The prompt, "A Journey Home".

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This was really well written. You captured Luna's personality and emotions perfectly. The story is a great look into what she could've gone through on the moon during her banishment.

6119539 I've always thought about her time on the moon. I feel like the reason she came back after 1000 years as NMM still is because she went insane with longing; she wanted to return so badly, she went insane with that desire.

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I've never thought of her going insane with the desire to return before, but that makes sense.

It could explain why Nightmare Moon's "challenges" to Twilight and her friends where lest fatal then they might have been. Even in her madness she wanted more than anything to come home, and defeat was her only path.

6119826 Maybe I'll write that some day.

I'm crying right now but it was beautiful this story just got to me. :pinkiesad2:

6128072 *offers tissues* Sorry for the tears!~

This is before I read it. I love this song and how somber it is, and now that I think about it I think Im going to be crying in the corner.

6570492 Oh, you very well will be crying. This is a little bit painful even for me to read sometimes~

6570513 I hate you. ;n;

I also see those lyrics you put in there.

6571682 Don't you just love dem feels, though? ;P

6572316 I AM OFF TO THE NEXT STORY!!

Do you mind if I do a Follow up to this? Both the song referenced (the version linked) and the powerful feeling you left in this story left me weak in the heart.

Please PM me for personal details if interested?

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