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Arreis Of Avalon


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Becoming a princess means you get a lot of power. However, what happens when the power you have was obtained through dark means? Twilight battles with an inner force, driving her to a goal.
The question is... Which voice is best to follow?
Her Mentor's? Or the one that has led her this far?

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 88 )

Interesting! I would like to see more.

Fun fact, this story came into idea by THIS video. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t6yzf00R-uY
Hence, the name is a dedication :pinkiesmile:

how do you read stories??? I read a story before, but I forgot how to read them! im new, so can u help me????? :applejackunsure:

3466739 EEEERM. :unsuresweetie: Well, You come to the story. You scroll and click on the green link of the chapter name. The first one in this fic is the Prologue. :twilightsheepish: That help sort it out??

thx... im such a noob... i forgot and thought they were different stories :ajbemused:

3466934 That's alright. I still don't know how to look up particular stories. ._.

"a single tear rolling down her face" ugh that sounds so clishe it's painful. Can't remember the last time i only cried 1 tear can you?It's so unrealistic but other then thatit was all good.try "tears streaming down her face".

This has my interest. I shall give this story three:heart:!

3467009 Yeah yeah, it's cliche. So sue me. :P I do what I want.

3467009
While the line is rather overused, I wouldn't say it's inaccurate :rainbowhuh: Not all sadness results in outright sobbing; sometimes your breath shortens, you swallow on a tightened throat and your eyes water slowly until either dabbed with a tissue, smeared with a hand (hoof) or they finally overflow, one tear at a time.

I would recommend finding a different way to express the idea, but crying "a single tear" is a different mood and feel than "tears streaming down her face."

i likes dis story. you get three derpys up! :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

3468227 Thank you for this comment. You managed to capture the tone of that part perfectly. And it is altogether very simple to shed a single tear - I speak from experiance.

"The moon shed a single tear"... I am intrigued. A fave for you, Arreis. ^^

Ardor, hm?~ Interesting~

Thank you for this chapter, Arreis.

3534093 Why this chapter in specific? ^w^

3534224I feel like now it's going to get even more exciting.

3534228Now that the threat is known and what Celestia said at the end.

More and stop with the wall of text

Rise and shine, Miss Sparkle. Rise and... shine.

Well at least that's all I could think of after reading the title. Looks interesting, I wait with hesitant precipitation!

4282845 Stop with the wall of text?? :rainbowderp: What do you mean?

4284762 wall of text means no paragraphs

4285997 There are paragraphs, though. Granted, not as many as usual, but there are paragraphs. I divide my paragraphs by the end of a thought or a change of dialouge. Basic rules of writing. This chapter had a lot of Twilight analyzing what was happening - Therefore, a lot of longer paragraphs, to help signify the end of a train of thought.

Lemme guess, based off the song?

4406200 I said that at the start of the comment chains, yep~ ^^ Love the song, and the PMV of it is wonderful. However, I made it quite a bit darker~

4406222 didn't see it. I just saw the title of the fic and decided to hell with it, why not?

4759630 Ba ba ba ba ba~ Now I'm craving McDonalds...

Interesting... So changelings are honesty?
Ironic, but explains why AJ was unable to see their lie.

Correct me if I'm mis-interpreting this

4789801 You're not mis-interpreting this in the slightest. However, it's NOT quite the changeling you're thinking of. ;) You'll learn more next chapter.

Literally you need to make another chapter this is such a good story!

4797231 Thank you very much. :pinkiehappy: Think of those last 3 chapters as the prelude to where the AU will start to come into play. This is where it will shift slightly from Canon.

5277260 You're in luck~ I started the latest chapter and itll be posted within a week...
... Hopefully. ^^; College Apps, School, craziness. I haven't gotten to work NEARLY as much on fun stuff. *le sigh* Such is life~

So wait, Barry the bear and Owlwicious are previous element bearers, the Nightmare Forces that made Luna go mad is inside Twilight, and said dude created the changelings? Huh, I guess it's go big or go home for you. Just remember, the more you stray from established lore, the more you have to keep track of.

5465599 Oh yes, trust me, I know. You're talking to the person who, in RP, has killed my main character at least 10 times, and she still has a beating heart. I know how to keep a story going. Its ALWAYS go big or go home to me

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Even though it takes months to put out a new chapter, the resulting chapter turns out great.

5833696 Thank you so so much. I've been trying to get these out alongside all my other fics, but that just gets impossibly hard. Your comment seriously made me feel better about it. :pinkiehappy:

pfff obviously Soul Eater!!!!!
oohhhhhh the plot keep tickens!!!

5837518 Of course it is! ;) Watched that anime 3 times through fully, still love that theme song.

5837529 yeah is the best :yay: gotta love that song.... still feel a little disappointed with the final chapter of both the manga and the anime :fluttershyouch:

Tomorrow, it begins

Well, I'll see your new chapter tomorrow then.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5958209 xD I highly doubt I'll be done the chapter by tomorrow.

5958352 But... but you said it begins tomorrow... :fluttershysad:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5958362 That's in fic, silly. Though, I AM past my word min now. So it won't be TOO long.

5958369 So you are saying you might have it out tomorrow? Even if it is at 11:59 PM?

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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