Spike puts Twilight to bed. Hng occurs.
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Hmm so I'm the first one to see it excluding the author well then first ha I claimed it
Simple and cute. Also made me sleepy.
This was pure, unadulterated cuteness. Good job.
5098902 Why, congrats~
5099481 *yawns* Y'know, made me sleepy too! I wrote it REALLY late at night, and was trying to fall asleep. Guess it worked!
5100040 Thank you kindly~
Looking at these comments,
Maaann, are we all on the verge of sleep??
.....just one more fic, what's another chapter gonna do...??
Yup, I can see your inspiration for "just another 100 pages..."
I love one-shots like this.
The best thing to read just before zzzzzzzz
EDIT: spelz + sleepy = lol
This right here is the reason I joined all those twispike groups, adorable brother sister moments. Well done.
5100289 xD You caught it all! Yeah, being a writer often makes me stay up FAR later than I should. :P Ah well~
5100309 Yeah, I saw I got added to that. I went ahead and sent them a message to take me of that group if it was meant as shipping; nothing against shippers, but this story has a sister x brother bond, not... Yeah.
I can't contain all my
Have a picture in lieu of a thousand words of me gushing:
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5101323 D'aaaw~
5101237 Squeeeeeee
There seems to be something trying to creep up on my face, but I can't figure out what it is...
Oh, right! It's called a smile.
Spike really is "Number One Assistant."
Thanks for writing!
*Yawns*
5100760 Most of those groups have a brother/sister and mother/son sections so you should be good.
Hnng is tight. Such a warm story. Just the thing for me at 3 AM. Thanks for this.
5104486 Glad you enjoyed it ^^
5103562 *chuckles* Thanks for reading ^^
5103823 Yeah, I was checking the groups this one was added to. ^^
This fic is cutedorable. I rate it as 4.5 out of 5 kittens.
Before leson zero, If after,,,,,,
KNOCK, KNOCK
"Eeyep"
"Bye Bye Smarty pants"
"Who's at the door at this hour, Spike?"
"
5109531 xD Yeah, this, to me, occurs a few nights after Twi starts staying in Ponyville. Like, this is even before the Grand Galloping Gala.
5108311 Nuuu, why is one kitten cut in half?!
You monster! 
5109689 Cute story nicely done, Thank you.
5109702
One kitten's in half because there was no cuddles, or huggles, but that's good because otherwise the fic would have lethal amounts of adorabetus. But it's less of the kitten being cut in half, and more of it being born half kitten
. Like people have 2.5 kids ... what ever happened to that .5 of a child happened to that kitty. And if children can be happy knowing they're half a person, then that kitten can probably be happy knowing you're fics lack of huggles made it born that way
.
PS: I just woke up, and my brain hasn't quite grasped the concept of sentience yet. At least not until my 20th Oz. of tea with enough sugar to explode a Pinkie Pie.
5109867 Always welcome~
5128210 Why, thank you~
It's official.
Spike, you da real MVP
5128348 *cracks up laughing*
a new candles flame
A space too many and it should be *candle's.
Nice fic but not great.
5134594 Erm... Thanks? ^^; I did write this very late at night.
Also, I think you might be wrong on the 'candle's' vs. 'candles'. I struggle with those often, but from everything I hear, you ONLY use the apostrophe when you're using a conjunction. It's the idea of 'The candle is flame' and 'the candle owns this flame'. I could be totally off base, but I just asked my lit teacher about this the other day. Sorry if I'm wrong.
5136988
A flame of a candle = a candle's flame OR a candle flame
the flames of candles = candles' flame
'candles flame' is just incorrect. Better would be candles' flames if you are referring to the flames from multiple candles, or simply candle flames if referring to flames from any number of candles.
Source: I teach English to ESL classes.
5137888 I'm still terribly confused by that whole... thing. But thank you.
I do appreciate the correction. Might I ask, why do you say the fanfiction isn't great?
5138796 It's very poetic, but it feels forced.
I'll give it another go, because you take criticism so well.
5139533 I'm ashamed I took it so badly, actually! I felt like I was kinda mean this time
BUUUT, I do try to accept criticism, especially when it's given properly. If I didn't, then what would I ever learn?
Thank you very much for giving it another go. It was a tad bit forced, perhaps. I wrote it very late at night, so yeah
This was a pleasant little story to read late at night. Having Spike put Twilight to bed instead of the other way around is adorable! Plus I guess you could say I'm guilty of that "one more chapter" type of mentality myself.
I do want to mention one thing that felt a little strange to me, but I know not everyone would agree. It was the following sentence.
The flow of the story makes it feel unnecessary to mention the concept of "a sexual partner’s sensual kiss," It seemed a bit jarring to me as it interrupted the otherwise continual "cuteness" of the story.
5310534 Yeah, I noticed that. I just wanted to define distinctly that this wasn't a ship fic. A lot of people ship them, but I personally don't. I didn't want anyone getting confused on that point.
*hits refresh 1000 times until viewer count hits 1000*
All was dark in Ponyville. Ponies rested in sleeps tender embrace,
*sleep's
Ouch, tough start. Pass.
edit: *tough
5375714 Now, allow me to question you for but a moment, Sir. I seem to recall you commented on this fanfiction once before with a very similar comment - that is, you felt the need to correct my grammar. For one thing, I have to wonder why you didn't catch this grammar mistake the first time you read through this. Obviously, a teacher of ESL classes is an absolute expert in the English language; as such, I would assume that you would catch a simple mistake in what was quite literally the second sentence of the story on your first read through. I recognize that I missed it, but I do not proclaim myself the most grammatically correct aspiring young author in the world. Moving on from that fact, you have commented on grammar in this fan fiction before, and mentioned that you thought it was a "nice fic but not great." I have to wonder why, after 8 weeks, you decided you suddenly enjoyed this fanfiction you thought was "very poetic, but feels forced." You mentioned you would read through it again because I took criticism so well; after 8 weeks, I rather gave up on receiving any extra comments from you. Perhaps it simply took you this long to read a fairly short fanfiction. Perhaps you had grading of your ESL class to catch up on.
I understand that my fanfictions are not loved by all, and that my flaws in grammar and spelling might make you dislike my fanfictions. But seeing as the only way I can interpret "Ouch, touch start. Pass." is that you did not want to read my fanfiction (despite having read it once before), I can conclude that you, sir, are a tad bit of a fool. If you think this is a pass up fanfiction, then by all means, stop reading it. And, if it truly was so unmemorable that you forgot you read this, then you're in luck: your original comment was so unmemorable, I had to scroll all the way down to this comment box just to remember you had commented on this fanfiction already! Had you not angered me, you would not have another essay to read from another aspiring fan of the English language.
Have a lovely day
PS: I am not quite positive what a 'touch start' is. Perhaps you meant 'tough start'?