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Epimancer


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*This is a clopfic. If you are under 18, do not proceed*

ageist :(

6044616 It's so amazing :rainbowkiss: make a part 2

Comment posted by Epimancer deleted Jun 1st, 2015

Ermaherd its so amazing and please read mine when you have the chance. The fic is my first and I need someone to make a story art. If you have any ideas to help improve my fic just message me and remember long live the Empire!!!!!

“Nope. That wasn’t even what was considered your ‘fetish’.” She replied. “We need to do exactly what gets you off.” Twilight was giggling. Science was so much fun, and it was about to get better.

I bet he wishes he said his fetish was to screw a mare.

6058183 Screw Rarity* would be more like it.

Just something I thought I should point out.

She came level with Twilight’s crotch, perfectly shaven.

If they are in pony form, mentioning that it was shaven wouldn't be right, especially since their whole body is covered in fur. So, when you say shaven, I think that all of her body except that one area is covered in fur. Be sure to watch yourself when describing characters that are not human because you wouldn't use a lot of the same words or adjectives to describe what you might see.

Also, try avoid using punny words as some of them actually exist within the fandom and others don't.

She probed around, lapping up the whip cream that was soaked with Twilight’s marecum.

From the many stories that I have read, reviewed, and edited, never once have I seen the word "marecum" appear as a word (probably because it sounds weird). So try sticking to show-accurate puns or the most common play-on-words used within the fandom.

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Fort Impression

6077178 I've seen marecum used... Alot really like over 50% of clopfics I've read have described the mare ejaculate as marecum:unsuresweetie: and it's really a personal preference considering there is no show term for it.

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As there shouldn't be a show term for it. No matter how it's used or said, cum is just cum. To make a pun or play-on-words out of any word you could possibly think to change takes away from the story.

If you could name these 'more than 50%' fictions that used this word, I can give you the ones I know that don't have them, and we can see how well more than 50% holds. I can give you benefit of the doubt, and agree that maybe 20% of the stories uses marecum, but over 50% is not the right number for someone who reviews and edits stories. Unless I miraculously randomly picked ones that didn't have the word in it; if that's the case, then what a stroke of luck. Sadly, even past all this, preference does not excuse the creation of words to milk puns to the point of beating dead horses.

6235577 I see what you did there. :raritywink:

Also, I've seen marecum used in a lot of clopfics too.

You gonna continue this?

MOW

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Doesn't count as a fetish, though. By definition.

6077178
Actually, that's one of the few areas where ponies don't usually have fur, so they wouldn't even need to shave.

So sexy! I wanna see more fetishes! But I hope there aren't scat or watersports in this fic.

“A fetish.” Twilight replied, “you know, a kink, desire, stimulant-”

Thank you, Lieutenant Commander Data.

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