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Oo. Kay, it was good IMO
Not bad. You kept switching between "hoofs" and "fingers," and you sometimes used the word "person." It was hard to tell in what sense you were writing this.
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Thank you for the feedback, I will edit those parts as soon as I can.
Scootaloo should respect Rainbow Dash's boundaries. Yes, I know I'm a prude.
Wow. Good and bad.
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Uhm, thanks? Haha, it turned out better then I thought it would, and I am glad you liked it!
FINISH HER!!
If you continued the story, how would it progress?
I would say this story is well not good but not to far from bad you have a little potential but this story wasn't a win as some context was off like fingers and just in general it seems more anthropology then anything else.Overall I would give it a 4.4/10
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Currently, I don't plan on it, since it was a one shot. Maybe I will in the future.
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The finger part was fixed, and thank you for the constructive criticism!
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Ok, then. I guess. Please do so, k?
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That's a matter of opinion. For instance, even though it was a basic accidental Anthro, ya gotta luv Anthro. Long as only biped ponies, normal ponies, or just anything not human-shaped, interact with the plot, really.
That was pretty good, albiet short
"The first clopfic I've ever been able to call cute."
-ModMCdl
I was doing a reaction to this and that last line was what got me, all you could here in my room was the sound of disgust and a loud "WHY!?!"
Dude. This so needs a follow up chapter. Seriously. Please make it happen.
Umm.... excuse me.... b-but if you don't mind.... I-I think.... I think.... um.. well...
OH WHO AM I KIDDING?!? THIS NEEDS MOARRRRRR
*meep*
opps... I sorry that I yelled....but seriously this needs more.... if that's okay with you...
that it was wrong
but this time she made way to
Like the other three ScootaDash clopfics I have favorited, this was adorable.
That ending was absolutely flawless.
Most excellent.