Bathing

Based on http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Dust-Bath-467426919 and http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Birdbath-521139439

Starburst (Daughter of Twilight Sparkle) and Prism Bolt (Son of Rainbow Dash) decide to go to the lake to clean themselves off after getting their wings filled with dust.Major shipping happens.

They both belong to Kilala:

http://kilala97.deviantart.com/
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/kilala

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thereareonly2genders

thereareonly2genders #1 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · · Bird/Water Bath ·

The problem with this next gen side fandom is some people will down vote things just cause they don't like the ship rather than a story just being a piece of shit. I don't read finds that have a lot of down votes cause I just don't have a lot of time. So I wonder if this and many other stories were shit or actually good stories with pissy spaghetti fans who don't like the ship

Late Night Delight

Late Night Delight #2 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · · Bird/Water Bath ·

6087154
Next gen always gets sticky because nobody can pull it off well enough to sate a niche. Doesn't matter if it's all head canon or not, people tend to hate OCs for just existing. I think they deserve a chance if they're not Mary Sues. Many a good story will get bypassed because the niche frowns upon original characters and canon ships, and only things where it's a whole AU and the characters are pretty much original in that storyline, a la Fallout: Equestria.

There's a whole universe to explore, with characters that can be inserted easily to tell their own stories, and people hate it. It's like originality only applies when it suits your tastes.

Also, semper fi brother

Pegasister107

Pegasister107 #3 · Jun 13th, 2015 · · · Bird/Water Bath ·

6087154 yeah, I´m not good with shipfics but shit is a big word.I guess this Kilala sub-fandom is more of a mess of ships than the main MLP fandom but I guess that I prefer that than it having 0 attention and 0 ships because of the characters being bad written or something like that.Yeah people don´t read much fics or ships they don´t support/sail but I aint one of them.If you complain about Turquoise or Claire make sure you´re not complaining about Sparity, if you complain about Illusion make sure you´re not complaining about Dislestia, I personally ADORE those characters so I don´t care who their parents are.
I enjoy Bride Of Discord not because Fluttercord is there but because Fluttercord was well-handeled............kinda sorta, I still can´t believe it all happened in just one month

ApplejackM