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And i wanted to start to read this...blegh.

6466362 If you ignore the homosexuality, this is a fantastic story. Since this story has no smut, and the whole thing isn't shoved in your face too hard I would recommend it anyway.

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3rd chapter and one of characters saying that gay relationships are common... some authors just dont have sense of reality

6466424 Reality can be boring at times; that's the great thing about fiction!

6466424 It seems that everything is turning into homosexual propaganda these days. My only advice is to try and tune it out like I do. If I didn't, I'd never get anything done.

The OC are getting rather hard to keep up with...and this story is rather diminishing the princesses. I see no hope for anyone unless the seal breaks. I don't know, just everything seems to be being dragged out.

6480095 Originally, things were supposed to kick off much earlier, but I felt weird just throwing problem after problem at the characters without some sort of break or sense that they were getting somewhere, so I added in some world-building and - hopefully - some parts that help understand the characters more.

I never intended for the OCs to get more screentime than the canon ones, but I wanted to get their 'quirks' down and on paper before the canon characters take back the spotlight.

Fortunately, I've gotten most of it out of my system, so the next chapter will be more about the Entropic Fractures and the other side.

6480577 That's a good point trying to flesh out the OCs. It just hurts watching the princesses suffer as they are with no hope, what Nightmare Moon did with their horns is just sicknening and any hope we might of had for this evil mare seems to be flushing down the toilet rather quickly. I'm just hoping that these fractures make her pay for what she has done.

I suppose I already mentioned this story reminds me of Pacific Rim?

6481206 Well Nightmare Moon did find a way to save the world. That's a bit of a point in her favor.

6483277 That is a if. We nor she knows if it will hold.