Beautiful

Note 1: Sir Hoof Prance Lovecraft is famous for his book series detailing the possibility of powerful, otherwordly deities observing and interacting with humanity.

Is ‘humanity’ even correct term to use here?

Otherwise,

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Do not try to edit when you’re running on energy drinks

Fixed, thank you for pointing that out

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Ok. I came back to reading this after having not read it for a while so it was confusing for me.

Assuming NMM will get a rainbow to the face some day, I am seriously wondering what will happen to all those she's "inducted". Even if they're nowhere near the blast zone, will they survive the sudden removal of NMM's power as they are "purified of the evil contamination"... On the other hand, Vinyl's influence is slowly drawing the dark mare out (kicking and screaming the whole way, heh). The story time scene in the hospital was a little cliched but it still worked fine and to be honest, it's something those ponies would do anyway.

p.s. Where the hell is Octavia?

Anyone else read this

Nightmare Moon paused, then grinned because she felt good that she could help Vinyl.

“I can fix you. I can make you better.”

and see this instead...
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