My name is Todd. I was a simple every day human and now I'm in Equestria. Sounds good right? Wrong the ponies know next to nothing about humans. What will I do? They don't know humans, this place is dangerous and I am
SO SCREWED!
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ginger468
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im enjoying this story alot cant wait to see more of it
Oh boy! Another "Brony in Equestria" story! Can't wait! *sarcasm*
6016981 actually Todd the character has only seen 3 episodes.
6016997 Thanks for the honesty
Dude, I'm sorry, but just stop. This story is a prime example of how to make a story as cliché as possible. This is what you call a self-insert, and if you know what's good for you, just cancel it. I hate to be critical, but this concept has been done to death; it cannot work no matter what you do to it. Your OC is Gary Stu #605, your characterization isn't developed at all, and your story itself has no direction; seeing as how there's no reason for "Todd" to be in Equestria other than to live out your self-insert Ponyville fantasy. Just please, either cancel this while you can, or do something absolutely creative no one has ever done before. Your story has already been featured in groups for notorious stories, so if you cancelled it, you would be doing yourself a favor.
yeah I just cancelled it.
Well I just lost the will to write. But thanks for telling me this was crap. Now I need some time to think.
6016886 sorry but its been cancelled
6017209 Thanks.
I know this has already been criticized, but i am actually going to tell you how to keep yourself writing and your story to be actually good.
The stories i make are not the best (far from it), but i do come up with neat concepts. I also think i am the first one to incorporate a doe in a clop-fiction. Always think outside of the box and always completely visualize a unique original concept, or play around and make something unoriginal better by doing something different with it. I like to bring up a list of mlp fan fiction cliches and see if my story includes any of them, and if it does, i start to rewrite.
When you have a visualized concept you can find it will be much more easy and fun to write.
6017335 Thanks man.