• Member Since 11th May, 2015
  • offline last seen Oct 27th, 2015

ginger468


Comedy writter pretty much also voice actor if anybody needs one

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The Stalion's life is crap, one bad thing after another. Just as things are getting worse a mare comes and picks him up. Story updates when I get inspiration or good ideals from readers.

Editing by crooked.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

might I suggest getting an editor.

So much error. so much.

6033855 your a editor right? so can you

My life just seems like it's getting worse

seem's

The need do what I do best, science

the need TO

The job isn't terrible isn't great either

get a but in there.

Radom ponies in a drunken rage just get in a fight for no dam reason.

Random, and damn

And that's the first paragraph.

Well normally the bar's crowded on weekends it always is, and with more ponies there's more fights

get an as in there! also, there's should be there are

I get punch a few times drop some drinks and for the most part I just kept it in.

punched, and get dem commas in dere!

I come and punch the shit out of this guy and my boss see's this

get that apostrophe outta dere!

does this pony usually have bad grammar?

I was something was wrong with her eyes.

no. don't.

So I took the umbrella and was obviously getting pored on but she enjoyed it and said "Ah refreshing."

What?

6033692 wall of text problem kinda fixed

6034075 WALL O' TEXT HAS YET TO BE VANQUISHED! FLEE FOR YOUR LIVES M80s

I hope you write some more soon!

6035790 i will to just need a bit of inspiration

6035177 I'm looking over the story now, re-editing, and yeah, wall o text still remains.... but I'm fixing it! With the pneumatic drill i call the "keyboard".

6086276 IT BE NUFFIN TO FIGT M80 FLEE FOR YER LIFE

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