Shy and timid Nora finally works up enough courage to ask Princess Celestia on a date. However, there might be more to Celestia than Nora originally thought.
Luna could have headed this off, had she been less intent to amuse herself at Nora's and Celestia's expense. That said, Celestia is a big idiot here in the classical way for stories like this.
Now we wait, and see what happens.
On a side note, I wonder if it occurs to Luna that, should she ever make good on her threat, she does have to fall asleep at some point.
This is a specially easy to solve problem. Just have Luna pop in her dream and shout "Celestia actually has a pennis!!". The shock would give Lulu enough time to explain things.
Of course, that'd be too easy
Lulu certainty won't do so. She'll tell Celly it's her fault, and she's the one who must solve it. Cute shenanigans while she tries to explain to her girlfriend she likes her and ask confusion is because she's afraid of what O'Malley thinks about her throbbing pony shlong
Didn't really like this chapter, but it needed to happen.
... Did it? Did it really? Granted, I've never been in a relationship myself, but it gets rather fucking old to see the same damn thing happen in virtually every single romance story on this site. I realize that emotions do make you think less clearly, but seriously... It's extraordinarily annoying to see an adult just run away from stuff like this instead of, I don't know... Talking things out like an adult?
Just my opinion, though. I'm only a single reader, after all.
7607027 True, but half of all fanfiction wouldn't exist if we actually applied real life logic to them. I don't read these stories for real life, I read them for drama, romance, and fun. If I wanted things to be like real life (boring and predictable), I'd actually go out and live my life instead of writing horse words all day.
Glad to see another chapter. Although with the cliffhanger, you better pony your ass up and post another chapter soon, or I will be less than amused with you, and you don't want that.
I'm with 7607027 on this one, I'm really tired of this cleche. You can get drama through the misunderstanding, but the one with the misunderstanding doesn't have to run away. Though I saw this coming from the very start, both the misunderstanding and Nora running, as that fits what I've grasped of her personality. That being said she didn't have to get as far as she did, I'd think one of the "sisters" would have been able to catch her before she got too far, especially since she stopped by her room to get dressed. And there are other ways of getting drama in a relationship, having a big misunderstanding happen is the very low hanging fruit of drama and is just so very tiresome. I don't care if it happens so often in real life, I really want to see it a lot less in fiction.
I hope someone catch up with Nora very quickly next chapter. They don't have to resolve the misunderstanding right away but please do not drag out the fleeing. Avoidance of a misunderstanding is even more annoying than the misunderstanding itself to me.
Other than that this was a fun chapter and now that things have come to a head (pun not intended but totally welcome) we can get to even more fun.
I dont really know why people have a problem with this cliche. Its a cliche for a reason, people run from their problems all the time. From ignoring it and hopeing it goes away to physically fleeing half way around the world just so they dont have to deal with it. Nora has self esteem issues and is prone to jumping to the worst conclusions, so this isnt unusual. Or out of charecter, also if you didnt know what Celestia and Luna were discussling youd think she was right and easily sympathize with her. So take a step back let the story run its course and see if the naritive flows. Dont get upset just because the obligatory roughpatch seems used or played out. Judge it for itsowm marits.
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR and where did you go mr author sir you robbed me of an amazing story I hope you start making chapters regularly again that would be AWESOME
Well, that didn't go as expected. Wording, Luna. Now a chase scene begins! Maybe. We'll see. Unless it happens off-chapter. Still ouch. Well, at least Celestia will know that Nora won't mind. Unless Luna won't manage to get to that part anytime soon. One thing irks me a bit - still calling her Ms. O'Malley. Celestia, the two of you are (or were) dating. I think you can use her first name safely. Oh well, probably another thing Tia doesn't realize - after all, it would be neither the first nor the last thing.
So, explanations soon. Assuming Nora won't run far far away where the sun doesn't shine.
And with this chapter, things are finally coming to a head...
Sorry, sorry... I had to say it.
Thankfully Luna at least understands how Nora feels about things now, so if things get too out of hand she may be able to straighten it out. Hopefully however, Celestia will be able to catch up with Nora and tell her the truth.
“And need I remind you of our previous discussion on the matter” Luna said with a snorted, her nostrils flaring. “Or, to be more specific, how it ended?” There was a flash of magic, and a coil of rope suddenly appeared in the air beside her.
That's still not funny. And Luna is still way out of line to go that far.
7609335 You obviously don't have siblings. Also, how the hell is it out of line for Luna? It fits with everything else we've seen from her in this story.
7609774 I do have siblings and I am pretty sure if I were a transgender male hiding his endowment it wouldnt be acceptable for them to threaten to expose my secret and also tie a rope around my penis and hang me by it for all to see. And I said she was out of line, not that she was out of character. Saying that this is Lunas character throughout doesn't make this instance okay it just means that Luna is often out of line and no one is stopping her.
Edit: Also if you dont know what I'm talking about. It used to be that this story had a bonus chapter where Luna basically just berates Celestia and in the end says that she would in fact do with that rope what I just mentioned. If you came to this story late you wouldn't see it now. The author seems to have removed it.
I reread this for the third time, and only just now realized something.
This can only be a trollficbait-and-switch, and that's putting aside how Celestia can get away with hiding a penis.(Seriously, a stallion's penis is almost directly behind their naval, no amount of shifting hir hind legs will hide that!)
E-peen. Dick measuring contest. These mean nothing to me. I am incapable of understanding why penis size is important. Really, who cares?
With one or two caveats. I CAN understand someone being too big, though not sure it's really an issue when limiting it to humans. But here? Here we have that clop scene where Nora can only take half of Blackie's length.
Maybe Nora is a size queen and got the absolute biggest toy she could. But outside of a few examples like Big Mac or Snowflake, ponies are ponies.
Celestia is a full blown horse.
At this point, I fully expect a chapter of Flat What's from Nora as Celesta explain hirself and just how the fuck this has worked for so centuries, a clop scene where Celestia sticks half hir dick in Nora, and they decide that it just won't work between them.
And then Nora swears off stallions and gets with Fluttershy.
Celestia continues being emo because they are so much bigger than anypony and has never been sexually satisfied. I mean, I guess there's shapeshifting magic, but if you have to do that EVERY DAMN TIME you want to be intimate...
Second Edit:Also, is bisexuality just not a thing here? I only ask because Luna and Celestia? or was it Twilight, or someone else at the party came across as extremely shocked that Nora was bi. Or maybe it's just me being way too mellow about hose kinda things.
I'm assuming a faster update this time? Last chapter had a not-so-cliffhanger ending so the wait wasn't annoying, but you can't leave on something like this. Screw YHaY, focus on finishing this up for good.
This relationship is still fucked even if Nora Gets over this running like a bitch panic of the overdone "walk in on half of a conversation and miss key details" trope. The whole Celestia has a shlong something like this would ruin any trust the two would have and damage any future dealings they have.
2 sides of an argument and half of it is heard.
7606496 Just like the real Pinkie (????) I keep running into you. o.O
Ernest Hemingway would be proud tho.
ETA on next chapter?
Erection should be erect, shouldn't it?
Uh oh, Luna.
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Luna said participates instead of participants.
For some reason, I'm imagining the next song to be Lily the Pink, but I'm probably wrong on that front.
Either way, not too shabby so far. Putting it on watch.
Luna could have headed this off, had she been less intent to amuse herself at Nora's and Celestia's expense. That said, Celestia is a big idiot here in the classical way for stories like this.
Now we wait, and see what happens.
On a side note, I wonder if it occurs to Luna that, should she ever make good on her threat, she does have to fall asleep at some point.
This is a specially easy to solve problem. Just have Luna pop in her dream and shout "Celestia actually has a pennis!!". The shock would give Lulu enough time to explain things.
Of course, that'd be too easy
Lulu certainty won't do so. She'll tell Celly it's her fault, and she's the one who must solve it. Cute shenanigans while she tries to explain to her girlfriend she likes her and ask confusion is because she's afraid of what O'Malley thinks about her throbbing pony shlong
That'll be hilarious
Then sexy times shall ensue, of course
But all that begets the question... Moar when?
We got a runner!
Quick Luna use the rope!
Goddammit Nora don't make this more complicated than it has to be!
7606563 I agree. It can't be soft...
7606794
FixedThatForYou
Well, how does the saying go? The road to fucked up town is paved with good intentions.
Now, Celly better get his shit together and clarifiy things with our favourite little irish gal or so help me!
7606918
I'm confident this will work out, in the end. Until we get there, expect lots of awkward social stumbling and wild fluctuating emotions.
... Did it? Did it really? Granted, I've never been in a relationship myself, but it gets rather fucking old to see the same damn thing happen in virtually every single romance story on this site. I realize that emotions do make you think less clearly, but seriously... It's extraordinarily annoying to see an adult just run away from stuff like this instead of, I don't know... Talking things out like an adult?
Just my opinion, though. I'm only a single reader, after all.
7606563 Wow. Very erection. Much dick.
7607027 True, but half of all fanfiction wouldn't exist if we actually applied real life logic to them. I don't read these stories for real life, I read them for drama, romance, and fun. If I wanted things to be like real life (boring and predictable), I'd actually go out and live my life instead of writing horse words all day.
7606509 *Giggles* I get around!
7607033 ... Eh, suppose I can't really argue the logic there. XD
No one ever listens to the whole story, no they just run from their problems.
Rough chapter but probably necessary to get Celestia to come clean. I really like Malley and Celestia together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Glad to see another chapter. Although with the cliffhanger, you better pony your ass up and post another chapter soon, or I will be less than amused with you, and you don't want that.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
15:45_9/30/2016
I'm with 7607027 on this one, I'm really tired of this cleche.
You can get drama through the misunderstanding, but the one with the misunderstanding doesn't have to run away.
Though I saw this coming from the very start, both the misunderstanding and Nora running, as that fits what I've grasped of her personality. That being said she didn't have to get as far as she did, I'd think one of the "sisters" would have been able to catch her before she got too far, especially since she stopped by her room to get dressed.
And there are other ways of getting drama in a relationship, having a big misunderstanding happen is the very low hanging fruit of drama and is just so very tiresome. I don't care if it happens so often in real life, I really want to see it a lot less in fiction.
I hope someone catch up with Nora very quickly next chapter. They don't have to resolve the misunderstanding right away but please do not drag out the fleeing. Avoidance of a misunderstanding is even more annoying than the misunderstanding itself to me.
Other than that this was a fun chapter and now that things have come to a head (pun not intended but totally welcome) we can get to even more fun.
I dont really know why people have a problem with this cliche. Its a cliche for a reason, people run from their problems all the time. From ignoring it and hopeing it goes away to physically fleeing half way around the world just so they dont have to deal with it. Nora has self esteem issues and is prone to jumping to the worst conclusions, so this isnt unusual. Or out of charecter, also if you didnt know what Celestia and Luna were discussling youd think she was right and easily sympathize with her. So take a step back let the story run its course and see if the naritive flows. Dont get upset just because the obligatory roughpatch seems used or played out. Judge it for itsowm marits.
eeee loved it but fucking hell i almost forgot this story existed till i saw the notification pop up
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR and where did you go mr author sir you robbed me of an amazing story I hope you start making chapters regularly again that would be AWESOME
God dammit Tia was leading her on...
7606537 Soon™
Well, that didn't go as expected. Wording, Luna.
Now a chase scene begins! Maybe. We'll see. Unless it happens off-chapter.
Still ouch. Well, at least Celestia will know that Nora won't mind. Unless Luna won't manage to get to that part anytime soon.
One thing irks me a bit - still calling her Ms. O'Malley. Celestia, the two of you are (or were) dating. I think you can use her first name safely. Oh well, probably another thing Tia doesn't realize - after all, it would be neither the first nor the last thing.
So, explanations soon. Assuming Nora won't run far far away where the sun doesn't shine.
And with this chapter, things are finally coming to a head...
Sorry, sorry... I had to say it.
Thankfully Luna at least understands how Nora feels about things now, so if things get too out of hand she may be able to straighten it out. Hopefully however, Celestia will be able to catch up with Nora and tell her the truth.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
That's still not funny. And Luna is still way out of line to go that far.
7609335 You obviously don't have siblings. Also, how the hell is it out of line for Luna? It fits with everything else we've seen from her in this story.
7609774 Out of line, not out of character.
Longer than what? Normal? Others?
7609774 I do have siblings and I am pretty sure if I were a transgender male hiding his endowment it wouldnt be acceptable for them to threaten to expose my secret and also tie a rope around my penis and hang me by it for all to see. And I said she was out of line, not that she was out of character. Saying that this is Lunas character throughout doesn't make this instance okay it just means that Luna is often out of line and no one is stopping her.
Edit: Also if you dont know what I'm talking about. It used to be that this story had a bonus chapter where Luna basically just berates Celestia and in the end says that she would in fact do with that rope what I just mentioned. If you came to this story late you wouldn't see it now. The author seems to have removed it.
I reread this for the third time, and only just now realized something.
This can only be a
trollficbait-and-switch, and that's putting aside how Celestia can get away with hiding a penis.(Seriously, a stallion's penis is almost directly behind their naval, no amount of shifting hir hind legs will hide that!)E-peen. Dick measuring contest. These mean nothing to me. I am incapable of understanding why penis size is important. Really, who cares?
With one or two caveats. I CAN understand someone being too big, though not sure it's really an issue when limiting it to humans. But here? Here we have that clop scene where Nora can only take half of Blackie's length.
Maybe Nora is a size queen and got the absolute biggest toy she could. But outside of a few examples like Big Mac or Snowflake, ponies are ponies.
Celestia is a full blown horse.
At this point, I fully expect a chapter of Flat What's from Nora as Celesta explain hirself and just how the fuck this has worked for so centuries, a clop scene where Celestia sticks half hir dick in Nora, and they decide that it just won't work between them.
And then Nora swears off stallions and gets with Fluttershy.
Celestia continues being emo because they are so much bigger than anypony and has never been sexually satisfied. I mean, I guess there's shapeshifting magic, but if you have to do that EVERY DAMN TIME you want to be intimate...
Second Edit:Also, is bisexuality just not a thing here? I only ask because Luna and Celestia? or was it Twilight, or someone else at the party came across as extremely shocked that Nora was bi. Or maybe it's just me being way too mellow about hose kinda things.
I'm waiting on baited breath for the next chapter.
7611430 They got taken out for editing and relocation. They'll be back in a future update.
Ringding dingaling
a vary good chapter and as the saying is the cat Is kind of out of the bag it is defiantly time for Celestia to come clean.
I'm assuming a faster update this time? Last chapter had a not-so-cliffhanger ending so the wait wasn't annoying, but you can't leave on something like this. Screw YHaY, focus on finishing this up for good.
This relationship is still fucked even if Nora Gets over this
running like a bitchpanic of the overdone "walk in on half of a conversation and miss key details" trope. The whole Celestia has a shlong something like this would ruin any trust the two would have and damage any future dealings they have.If booze gives you the inspiration to write, I'll send you a box of Jack Daniel. 8D
This updated 10 days ago? 10 days?! I had no idea; I'm fairly certain it didn't show on my feed.
...
Hey, Celestia... Teleport!
.....crossed legs, rope....
She's bondage loving herm, isn't she?
Logical. 3 races and 2"genders" in one package.
7766862 *cough* Feck *cough*