Shy and timid Nora finally works up enough courage to ask Princess Celestia on a date. However, there might be more to Celestia than Nora originally thought.
At first I thought she was trying to be funny with the name... but then it hit me. Celestia got the mouse when Twilight first became her student, back when Luna was still on the moon. The mouse has dark fur like Luna. Celestia named it Artemis. Celestia takes Artemis everywhere and fawns over him.
Why would you do that to my feels?
“CeLesTIA!” Saddle Rager gasped, raising a hoof to her mouth.
“In the flesh,” the construct said. It bowed slightly only to pause. “No, t-that’s… that’s not right. I… It’s all wrong. I’m not… not this… shell…” Slowly, the construct stood back up, the metal in its legs scraping together loudly.
“My n-name is Coltron...”
Oh, the tasty irony.
I like how you have Nora having those moments where her mind drifts to naughty things during the day. It's not just guys that do it. It makes her feel more realistic in my opinion.
A ponification of Age of Ultron!? Fucking great, something I want to see in theaters.
So Nora isn't oblivious to Fluttershy, just not into her romantically. I had thought so but just wanted to be sure, can't help but feel bad for 'Shy though.
You deserve all the likes in the world for that 'Witness me!' joke, but sadly all I can do is one like, a favorite, and continue following this story with eager anticipation. You magnificent bastard!
The only problem was that for about a week after the movie came out, all the nerdy fancolts were going around screaming ‘Witness me!’ as they did stupid shite with each other.”
I jumped in surprised, only to have a massive blush explode across my face as I realized that I had zoned out. Sinking deeper into my seat, I pulled my knees to my chest and hugged them. No, bad Nora. No working on your dirty little fanfiction during a date!
time to see Matter-Horn blast Coltron through a building, collapsing it the process
Nerd alert time!
I do believe you are thinking of the scene where Hulkbuster fights Hulk. So, in this case, I would probably go with a fight between the two Power Ponies, perhaps the Fluttershy one and the Twilight one.
I wish I had more to say, but nope, I'm just happy.
P.S. I hope Flutters isn't going to be too much of a problem, though now I'm dreading that it'll be she who eventually blows Celestia's cover. Quite painfully blows it...
P.P.S. Fluttershy is the best sad-faced emote. That... feels wrong for this post.
“Nothing, really,” I said with a shrug. “It was actually pretty good. The only problem was that for about a week after the movie came out, all the nerdy fancolts were going around screaming ‘Witness me!’ as they did stupid shite with each other.”
6349433 Can you please be a normal person and post all of your thoughts in a single comment? It's... irking to be scrolling through to read comments, and see one name and picture show up over half a dozen times and have them NOT be replies to other comments. Just... Don't do that. There's a reason the people who invented the keyboard included the "Enter" button. It's useful for when you want to make multiple paragraphs on a single page.
Forty -.., forty SEVEN BITS! that's insane! Almost 16 USD for a movie?! Oh wait.... Nevermind.... Yeah, that's about what an evening ticket was actually. *hides in corner* Seriously though, if she's dreaming of a metallic Celestia lookalike transforming into a stallion... Yeah, this could work, we think. Keep going! ;)
Upon getting over the initial surprise, a small frown crossed Fluttershy’s muzzle before she suddenly puffed out her chest and spread her wings slightly.
This action caused Celestia to take a step backwards in shock.
I really like the character dynamic with adding Fluttershy to the mix. It gives the story a more relative feel to it. I am really enjoying the story so far and looking forward to what comes next.
“Have you tried returning her feelings?” Celestia asked, cocking an eyebrow. “No,” I scoffed, laughing softly. “As I said, I’m not interested.”
This brings up an awkward point. Why is Nora so interested in Celestia? Up to this point, the question has gone unanswered, but it's reached the point where it kind of needs an answer.
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Ha Ha.
At first I thought she was trying to be funny with the name... but then it hit me. Celestia got the mouse when Twilight first became her student, back when Luna was still on the moon. The mouse has dark fur like Luna. Celestia named it Artemis. Celestia takes Artemis everywhere and fawns over him.
Why would you do that to my feels?
Oh, the tasty irony.
I like how you have Nora having those moments where her mind drifts to naughty things during the day. It's not just guys that do it. It makes her feel more realistic in my opinion.
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Lol, Stalkershy. Sniffin' hair is a pretty big indicator!
A ponification of Age of Ultron!? Fucking great, something I want to see in theaters.
So Nora isn't oblivious to Fluttershy, just not into her romantically. I had thought so but just wanted to be sure, can't help but feel bad for 'Shy though.
WITNESS ME
mediocre max....mediocre
You deserve all the likes in the world for that 'Witness me!' joke, but sadly all I can do is one like, a favorite, and continue following this story with eager anticipation. You magnificent bastard!
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Not bad, but I would have gone with Michael Neigh and Fluttershia Lebouf present: Saddleship
I actually had to look this one up.
Hadn't see that movie.
MICHAEL BAY!
Some minor errors with tense and grammar sprinkled about, most of which is in the second half, but it was a good chapter overall.
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....WHAT.
What the fuck.
I... words are beyond me right now....
Holy Jesus, mother of Mary. What. Have. You. Done!?
Right... ok... let's read the next line...
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!?!?!?!?
Nice save there, m8.
Nerd alert time!
I do believe you are thinking of the scene where Hulkbuster fights Hulk. So, in this case, I would probably go with a fight between the two Power Ponies, perhaps the Fluttershy one and the Twilight one.
So was Artemis a reference to something? Just seems a touch random to give her a mouse when she already has Philomena as a pet.
Hahahah, brillyant!
I am disappointed that there was newspaper selection scene for more movie puns
Another good chapter.
6349200 Saw a few kids at the lakes rope swing near my house screaming that. it was pretty funny tbh.
Forty-seven bits?! Jeez, Gollywood is bleeding the average pony dry!
Also, Nora? Ewww. Dreaming up erotic fanfiction of some innocent franchise is just wrong.
Artemis x Popcorn OTP
Yay! You wrote more!
I wish I had more to say, but nope, I'm just happy.
P.S. I hope Flutters isn't going to be too much of a problem, though now I'm dreading that it'll be she who eventually blows Celestia's cover. Quite painfully blows it...
P.P.S. Fluttershy is the best sad-faced emote. That... feels wrong for this post.
Luna and Tiberius are best Princess/pet combo.
Plus Luna ba booty.
Hey that's not nice, I pushed my friend out of a cars path while screaming witness me,
I had to make a fast desision
6350072 Don't I know it! I say some people have the worst tastes
This was a funny chapter. I like it.
I'm sorry, I'm pretty sure I read that wrong.
Okay, apparently I didn't. WHAT KIND OF MOVIE IS THIS?!
Bad Nora. Very bad indeed. No need for such thoughts when you can currently be acting on them with the pony next to you.
6352067 What in the name of Celestia?! I didn't even See that first sentence!
Sounds about right, even for a Matinee. Hate to see the price for refreshments...
Ah, so Nora isn't obvious to Fluttershy she just doesn't care enough to force the pegasus to stop. Still, that might be a problem.
Casual!Celestia is best Celestia. Really, that mare needs to relax more.
Thanks for typing this with a hurt finger.
Can someone explain the "fizzy drink" thing to me? Or is it not even a thing and I'm just dumb? I feel like it's a thing and I don't get it.
I see what you did there. Also...
WITNESS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job! That fanfic part caught me off guard, as much as I like the avengers, I'm but into it in THAT way.
I'm probably the only one here who didn't get the 'witness me' bit.
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Thanks for putting the video there, btw.
6349433 Can you please be a normal person and post all of your thoughts in a single comment? It's... irking to be scrolling through to read comments, and see one name and picture show up over half a dozen times and have them NOT be replies to other comments. Just... Don't do that. There's a reason the people who invented the keyboard included the "Enter" button. It's useful for when you want to make multiple paragraphs on a single page.
Also, Stalkershy, huh? Well, let's hope that she does evolve into a Flutterrape, then.
Forty -.., forty SEVEN BITS! that's insane! Almost 16 USD for a movie?! Oh wait.... Nevermind.... Yeah, that's about what an evening ticket was actually. *hides in corner*
Seriously though, if she's dreaming of a metallic Celestia lookalike transforming into a stallion... Yeah, this could work, we think.
Keep going! ;)
"Power ponies: age of coltron"
Tranformers XIIXIXXIXXII: even bigger shit blows up!
Edit: Wait, fuck! Ultron isn't tranformers, is it?
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Nope, the closest I can think of is Ultra Magnus. Ultron has always been an Avengers villain.
"jumped in surprised" -> "jumped in surprise"
"You’re all killers. Murders." -> "You’re all killers. Murderers."
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Power Ponies: Age of Coltron...
Why is this NOT a fanfiction in of itself?!
I really like the character dynamic with adding Fluttershy to the mix. It gives the story a more relative feel to it. I am really enjoying the story so far and looking forward to what comes next.
What happened to the part with Luna and the projector guy
...........is it wrong for me to say that I kinda would've liked to see wehere Nora's fantasy would've went if she hadn't caught herself?
This brings up an awkward point. Why is Nora so interested in Celestia? Up to this point, the question has gone unanswered, but it's reached the point where it kind of needs an answer.
My god that was cute.
Nice. Rarely see Age of Ultron get love. A friend told me it’s the least popular of the Avengers set, though at this point it’s my favorite.
Why does Lyra seem afraid of Nora? I thought she liked humans.