Shy and timid Nora finally works up enough courage to ask Princess Celestia on a date. However, there might be more to Celestia than Nora originally thought.
You end on so many cliffhangers, Nora best watch out or she very much will fall over a cliff! I presume she's dreaming because she has been rescued already.
9255953 I never said she shouldnt be upset, but to the level she takes it, consistantly, is the problem. Thats not healthy, approaching mentally unsound. She needs to see a shrink over how much she thinks every little thing needs to be just that dramatically damaging to her preceived life. Something bad happens you work past it, not sit down and claim nothing else matters, every single time.
9255993 I know how to add more drama! Nora's parents are NOT dead! They were abducted by Fair Folk and transported through space and time to Equestria, and became alicorns! Luna is her mom and Celestia is her dad! And they remembered it only recently, because by their subjective time it was eons ago. So they can't be lovers, it would be incest! But happy family reunion, yay!
I'm pretty sure Celestia is just a fairly feminine-formed stallion. Mad Max hasn't done the full reveal yet, so that may not be right, but so far, none of Celestia's inner reactions have pointed to any true femininity, whether from transition or hermaphrodism. Personally, I'm betting it's a combination of a feminine build - with possibly some ingrained issues relating to it - and some old societal stigma relating "Princesses" (pony rulers) needing to be female, originally forcing Celestia to hide his true self in order to conform to his leadership role.
Bingeread the whole thing after the last update. Normally I truly detest anything regarding humans in Equestria. But I'm in desperate need for more Twilestia, so I take everything which at least has Sunbutt in it. And this so far has been a pleasant surprise. As I said, I don't like OC insertions, Anon or humans with my dose of pone, Nora seems fine though. This might be due to my affinity to girls similar to her in both appearance and behavior. Well she really is a mess though, running from problems seems to be a repetitive motive. I'm hooked and can't wait to see how or if, lol, the story will proceed.
Algae is a slimy goop made up of microscopic single-celled plants. O__o
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Whoops. Looks like I uploaded the wrong version.
Yaaaay, moar madmax!
interesting, we finally got some back story on our human friend
stayclassy
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Seaweed does count as algae, so you were technically correct.
Really curious as to what deep onesque monster is responsible.
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I guess this is a kelpie.
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Wrong version or not I'm just happy to see an upload, still love this story.
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I think your right there.
Glad we got the whole arrival story shown, was wondering about that. Can't wait to read more.
It's back, yay!
Sweet sweet nectar~
You end on so many cliffhangers, Nora best watch out or she very much will fall over a cliff! I presume she's dreaming because she has been rescued already.
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I never said she shouldnt be upset, but to the level she takes it, consistantly, is the problem. Thats not healthy, approaching mentally unsound. She needs to see a shrink over how much she thinks every little thing needs to be just that dramatically damaging to her preceived life. Something bad happens you work past it, not sit down and claim nothing else matters, every single time.
Soooo, Celestia is transgender or just an ordinary futanari?
When can we expect the next chapter? Not trying to rush you of course i just really enjoy this story
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I know how to add more drama! Nora's parents are NOT dead! They were abducted by Fair Folk and transported through space and time to Equestria, and became alicorns! Luna is her mom and Celestia is her dad! And they remembered it only recently, because by their subjective time it was eons ago. So they can't be lovers, it would be incest! But happy family reunion, yay!
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*slams fist on table* Get this man a cigar and a promotion!
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...Do we still get the clop scene?
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Between Celestia and Luna, they remembered that they are husband and wife and decided to make a little brother or sister for Nora!
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So who can Nora bang? Can she bang the brother/sister?
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Of course no, it would be incest!
Fluttershy. And maybe Big Mac, if he's interested in threesome.
I hope author arrives and put up an actual chapter, not my stupid lol-guesses...
Ever so helpful, Moonbutt. Hits the pause button, no explanation, and then simply ejects the tape.
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I'm pretty sure Celestia is just a fairly feminine-formed stallion. Mad Max hasn't done the full reveal yet, so that may not be right, but so far, none of Celestia's inner reactions have pointed to any true femininity, whether from transition or hermaphrodism. Personally, I'm betting it's a combination of a feminine build - with possibly some ingrained issues relating to it - and some old societal stigma relating "Princesses" (pony rulers) needing to be female, originally forcing Celestia to hide his true self in order to conform to his leadership role.
I know this is dumb - so, normal for me - but I just realized that Nora is the little sister. Is she also an Albatroaz? (look up L'il Sis Nora)
Where do you get OFF being such a cock tease?
Excellent chapter and all... But come on.
Bingeread the whole thing after the last update. Normally I truly detest anything regarding humans in Equestria. But I'm in desperate need for more Twilestia, so I take everything which at least has Sunbutt in it. And this so far has been a pleasant surprise. As I said, I don't like OC insertions, Anon or humans with my dose of pone, Nora seems fine though. This might be due to my affinity to girls similar to her in both appearance and behavior. Well she really is a mess though, running from problems seems to be a repetitive motive. I'm hooked and can't wait to see how or if, lol, the story will proceed.
Not sure what i’m Liking more. New chapter for this story or the new cover pic.
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Don't you just love how Lyra's obsession with humans came from an old episode where she sits on a bench like a human?
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for some reason this dude (thanos from Kid Icarus) came to mind after seeing the cover art, hmmm-ing intensifys
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more reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Now I sit and wait.....
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And wait we shall...
3 years of following,
But I would wait another 3 for the conclusion.
Bingeread the whole thing. Want more. Who has more?
Please sir? I want some more.
Hope you plan on continuing to do this story along with the new YHaY sequel. Nice story.
9814150 Eeyup. The next chapter is about 3/4th of the way done.