• Published 8th May 2015
  • 6,140 Views, 20 Comments

The Problem with Potions - Dr Cloppenstein



Apple Bloom's potions have been causing strange side effects. Applejack insists on observing her sister's lessons with Twilight and testing the results. Unfortunately, Applejack isn't prepared for the side effects of Apple Bloom's latest potion.

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Comments ( 20 )

You know... I think this is one of the best first person Applejack fics I've read, clop or no.

Any open requests?

5956699
Umm... I've been drinking a bit tonight. I'm not sure I quite understand what you're asking.

5956716 I'll get back to you when your sober,

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5956699

He's asking if you'll write a request for him. I got a question about commissions within a few hours of posting my porno too.

I can't say that my brain shifts toward arousal when thinking of buzzing bees, but on the whole this was good! And agreed with 5955809, this is some darn fine AJ.

5959383

I can't say that my brain shifts toward arousal when thinking of buzzing bees,

Obviously you have the wrong kink. Sexy, sexy bees. :pinkiecrazy:

5959435 Bees? In MY vagina? It's more likely than you think!

Well then!

Twilight wouldn't... that could be dangerous, using her horn like...

You know, that always bothered me when it happens in other stories... :pinkiecrazy:

Yes. Just yes, and more. I'd love to see more about their love post-potion

5959435
Obligatory "Applejack and Sexy Bees" response link:
http://throb.gizmodo.com/this-is-an-agricultural-tool-1703180471/+charliejane

Warning: Link doesn't go to porn or anything, but there is a picture of a vibrator, so it might be considered NSFW, depending on your workplace.

This clop was so good I sorta shorted out my vibrator, on however-the-hell that's possible...

Fantastic story, AJ felt spot on and Twilight... honestly Twilight was good but I don't think we heard enough from her to say she was spot on too.
My only complaint is that I don't like one shot stories but that's the majority of all stories on here so I'm adapting. Also Twijack is my favorite pairing so yeah...

this was awesome!

This was very nice. The potions concept is classic, but the way that you used it was quite nice; and the sex between AJ and Twilight was really nice to. Well done all around.

This style...

Seems familiar somehow...

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Familiar?

You don't say...

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