Norm De Plume
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I've never seen a story use such equine methods of grooming in such a sensual/sexual way. It makes for a very different kind of clopfic than the more humanized styles. It draws some focus away from the physical aspects, making the scene lighter and more emotional. All in all, an effective and unique writing method.
Not as sexy, but very interesting and fun to read.
Holy flaming chinchillas, this was the first fic I ever read, like, ever, over on the mlp fiction website.
Looks like its gone full circle
Nice to see you here at last
Dominant Applejack? I'm okay with this.
I knew I'd read this before! This is a great (and powerful) bit of storytelling.
Even though I'm not a Trixie fan, I like this pretty much, you've done a good job. Favorited
Hmm... Ya know this was a clopfic but didn't feel like one. It was really emotional and lighthearted. I focused more on the reason of the actions and not just the actions by the ponies themselves. Well done.
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why isn't there a thumbs-up button???
i say we need a sequel
Well, there's always room for somepony to take a look at that little organization at Neighbraska U.!
I think Rainbow said it best:
Very well done, and I love how you kept it more in-keeps with equine anatomy/capabilities. Thumbs are definitely up!
A clop-fic... but it didn't FEEL like a clopfic. And
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I would LOVE to see more clops like this, when it has STORY not sex. You really got me engrossed and it just seems to WORK. No other words. Just awesomenous my dear friend. Take my thumbs, favorite and even a watch! You deserve it
Really liked this story. Loved everything about it for the most part. Most say this pairing isn't seen and even though they don't end up together. I can see why and it was a happy ending for the both of them. Loved the back story you made for Trixie also.
Dominant AppleJack? What in tarnation!? I'm not okay with this.
... I still read and clopped, you magnificent bastard.
When I saw all the nibbling, my first thought was, "Are they cooking or clopping?"
But I jest. In all seriousness, this was quite the nice story to read. The erotic part was well done to make it feel less like clop and more like romance of a sort. I am glad you didn't go for the contrived "Both mares find something in each other that was never there before" thing as so often happens.
This was definitely a favorite read of any story I've seen.
I'd say we caught the...tail...end of the bad ones?
ZING!!!
GM
There are places where you get decidedly too technical with Trixie's magic, and it ends up conflicting with what actually happened in the episode - Trixie CAN speak in first-person, she does so at least twice in the episode; and Trixie WAS shown to have spells of her own.
It doesn't really hurt my overall enjoyment of the story because it's not actually important TO the story, but it kind of sticks out.
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Maybe she was lying. :P One never knows just what Trixie can or can't do. But I only saw her do variations on Rainbow's rainbow and cloud skills, Applejack's lasso skills, and Rarity's fashion. (plus the standard unicorn telekinesis.) She brought *nothing* against the Ursa that she hadn't used on stage.
"The mimicking of other ponies' talents has rendered her unable to speak of herself in anything but the third-pony."
So... Was this written in first person or third person?
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First, I don't think what she used on Rainbow Dash is close enough to what Rainbow Dash did to qualify as a "variation". Creating a tornado isn't remotely like refracting light with water droplets, and Dash's only interaction with clouds was to burst through them.
But okay, let's assume those count as "variations". She cast at least one spell before seeing any demonstration of any talents; she conjured a bouquet of flowers. This was an actual, explicit spell, you could see her magical aura. I also contend that the operation of the stage - the fireworks, the neon images, the voice amplification, and even moving it for traveling purposes - must be done by magic, as it is done with perfect precision and Trixie works alone (and that thing has to be heavy, do you really think Trixie pulls it from place to place?).
And you presented Applejack as a living lie detector that Trixie was scared of, so "maybe she was lying" doesn't cut it...
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Ah, well. I tried!
It was good, well timed and an interesting ship. It ended on a happy note and was fun to read, few things that made me
but overall a good fic. I wish to see more of your writing.
FF
It's good to know that one of my favorite fics, and best inspirations, is here on FiMFiction.
That was an amazing ending! I love it!!
PS This is more a romance than a clop...still not bad.props to you.
While this is a clop it didn't feel like it and I loved it. It was like a crush gone right
not bad.
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This is one of the only fictions I've actually sat down and read without someone reading them on Youtube. I'm very very glad I read this and I must say that your style of writing is very good. I can't wait to read more of your work!
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*blood circulation in head rising*
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*pigments in skin changing*
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*Nosebleed*
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This is amazing. The level of description in he story foreplay and then the Clop bit was glorious. Im honored to say that you made me feel real damn good. Even if you didnt get real graphic but Im fine with that since I can imagine a rather vivid scene for that.
anyways keep up the good work and keep writing cuz you are amazing.
That was beautiful, the story, the sensual parts and the whole warm feeling radiating from this fic is amazing, thank you for writing it.
Damn son, how did you make this?
This was so well written that I realistically dont know what to say in response. After several minutes of allowing my mind to meander over this slice of heavenly life I believe I can finally give pause and comment truly.
Fantastic. The way you used submission to give Trixie a new outlook on life, let alone a new lease, was creativity at its finest. I will hold this version of Trixie in my heart for a long ride.
Wow.
That's a good shipfic.
It gave me feels.
I'm crying. Well done.
And here I have stumbled upon the biggest example of excellence in this style of writing.
No seriously, this is how it should be done. It's not exactly romantic, it's focused on teaching Trixie a lesson. But at the same time, it's down to earth, it's sweet without being sticky, and Trixie has suddenly become adorable in my mind. I want another! Have her travel around and find her lovers! Have her come back to Ponyville and make amends with the others! You can even do it in this same style if you want, and I would not mind at all.
This DESERVES a sequel. It won't get one for all intents and purposes. But it deserves one.
Starred. Mustached. Done.
Dear goddess... This was wonderfully written
Another great read from you.
Dominant Applejack is just perfect, and the foreplay was wonderful. Have a fave!
I burst out laughing right here. Again later on when Big Mac mentioned the part about Applejack taking her bath early.
You did a very good job at developing their relationship at a reasonable pace, and done in a believable manner. Being a mimic is certainly one of the more unique takes I've seen on Trixie's Cutie Mark, as well as making it the reason for her speaking in third-person all the time (one wonders with a little bit of fridge horror if her talent also forces her to think in third-person as well).
This fiction has been listed as one of my all time favorites on my page since I first read it years ago. Coming back and rereading, I can see it has not lost an ounce of its charm.
bless you.
This was nice and cute. But above it all, it was most definitely the... Horsiest story I've read on this site to date. For the first time I actually felt the stepback of "Oh right, they're actually horses, not humans in a different shape"
All the actions, affections and even the sex was pretty darn... Animalistic. It was a nice and interesting change of scenery
I love that 💖😍❤️😍❤️😍
I love this story! Never actually thought about this kind of ship, but the way it was detailed and everything...it was so sweet <3
Infinity/10, nothing wrong with this at all.