• Published 10th Apr 2015
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One Afternoon At The Dazzlings - Sapphire the Gem



Aria Blaze is home alone and decides to play Five Nights At Freddy's.

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One Afternoon

Aria Blaze walked promptly home from school. It had been yet another boring day of seemingly endless lectures about things that she already knew. She had been doing this since the Battle of the Bands, five months prior, when she and her sisters lost the battle and their pendents to the Rainbooms.

All was well between the two former rivals now, as matter of fact, the Rainbooms would become the Dazzlings only friends in all of CHS. The other students still had their doubts about the three sirens and often pretended that they didn't even exist.

At least they don't try to kill us every time we see them anymore, Aria thought, shuddering as she remembered having to save Sonata from some weird jerk who was about to punch her in the face. In the end it was Adagio and Sunset Shimmer who saved them both.

Aria smiled at the memory as she made her way up the stairs to the Dazzlings' apartment. Whenever she reached the room Aria reached into her pocket, pulled out the keys, unlocked the door, and stepped inside. The apartment was a pretty decent size with two bedrooms, a bathroom, a family room, and a small kitchen. The first room was the family room, which had the kitchen to the right, on the left were two doors that lead to the girls' bedrooms. Aria sighed and tossed her backpack on the table and made her way to the room that she and Sonata were forced to share.

The room had two twin beds, one on each side of the room, half of the room was pink the other was teal. Aria quietly sat down on her bed. The teal wall next to her was plain along with the other walls of that color. The only thing of Aria's that had a pattern of any kind was her star pattered bedspread. It was the polar opposite of Sonata's pink walls covered with posters even her bed had about ten plush animals on it.

Aria looked around the room normally Sonata was already talking on and on about her day, or Adagio was lecturing them both about getting along, but not today. Sonata was currently hanging out at Taco Bell with that crazy party girl, Pinkie Pie, and Adagio was out searching for new pendents.

This gave Aria an opportunity to skip her homework and play her favorite game, Five Nights At Freddy's. Aria smiled again as she pulled out her phone and opened the app (she only had the demo but who cares). Once the main menu was up it had the name of the game, play icon, and in the background was Freddy Fazbear. The screen was designed to look like something from the Eighty's, glitching every so often to reveal Freddy's exoskeleton for a second or so and then went back to normal.

Aria grabbed her pillow and tried to make it into a suitable backrest. Once she was satisfied, Aria tapped the play button on the screen.
It took about thirty seconds to load, but in the end it was worth it. The game started and Aria could finally take a break from her day. That was until the screen went to a image of Freddy's face.

Aria shrugged, "I've never seen that death screen before."

Aria waited patently for the game to finish loading, but, it never did. Aria suddenly got a strange feeling, one that she hadn't felt sense that one weirdo stallion, back in Equestria, was spying on her and her sisters. She felt like she was being watched. Aria looked up from her game and saw Freddy Fazbear himself standing in front of her.

Aria felt her heart pounding in her chest. She swallowed hard and tried to hide her fear. Freddy looked at her like a dingo looks a baby. A smirk appeared on his face and he took a step closer to Aria. Losing all control Aria shrieked and ran out of the room and into the kitchen. Thinking fast she grabbed a large kitchen knife and held it close. It didn't take long for Freddy to wander on into the kitchen and spot Aria.

"Stay back!" She cautioned the robotic bear, "I've got a knife and I'm not afraid to use it!"

Freddy stared deep into Aria's eyes in the creepiest way possible. Aria stood her ground she couldn't let him catch her. Not now. What if the others are near by? Aria began to feel afraid. Very afraid. Freddy seemed to sense this change in behavior and lunged. Aria tried to dodge the attack, but he already had her pinned to the wall. Aria maneuvered the knife she was holding, out of his grasp, and stuck it straight into Freddy's neck joint.

The robotic bear cried out, as if it were in pain, and tried to bite Aria. Trying to avoid being bitten, Aria, barely managed to slit all of Freddy's main wires. Freddy suddenly released Aria and fell to the ground. Aria stood there watching as her opponent faded away into nothing more than a memory. The sound of children cheering echoed through the apartment. No it was clear that Aria had won.


After a couple of hours Adagio and Sonata returned. Aria smiled when they entered, "So what's up?" Adagio sighed and placed her and Sonata's bags on the table.

"No luck." She muttered. Aria's smile tuned to a frown.

After a few seconds she decided to change the subject, "Sonata what about you?" I don't think that I even have to ask.

"It was great!" Sonata replied, "After Taco Bell we started to go shopping, and even came across Adagio!"

"So what about you, Aria?" Adagio asked.

Aria froze at the question, "What did you say?"

"I mean, how was your afternoon? You're acting kinda off. Besides you only act this way if something is bothering you."

"Okay fine!" Aria snapped, "I was nearly killed by Freddy Fazbear!"

Adagio and Sonata looked at each other for a couple of seconds before they burst out in laughter. "Oh Aria!" Sonata snickered, "Were you playing that dumb old game again!"

Aria mentally kicked her self, Stupid! You know that they'll never believe you! "Yes."

Adagio tried to stop laughing at her sister, "Well if it scared you that much then you shouldn't be playing it."

"It didn't!" Aria retorted, "It's just one character is looks an awful lot like that teddy bear on Sonata's bed!"

Sonata gasped with surprise, "Why would you compare that creepy old thing to Mr. Ted!"

"Because," Aria replied, "He wears a hat, a bow tie and is brown! He is a perfect match!" Before Sonata could say something else Adagio stepped between them.

"Girls, please, don't start." Aria and Sonata glared at each other one final time before they went their separate ways. Sonata marched off to her room, and Aria collapsed on the couch, for a long nap.

Author's Note:

My first FIM Fiction YAY! :pinkiehappy: Thank you so much if you made to the end of the story. If you liked it please tell me I would love to hear it. :twilightsheepish: Constructive criticism is welcome. If you don't like please don't comment and hate on my creativity.:ajbemused: If you want to be a turd and do it anyway, the comment will be removed and you might be blocked.

Comments ( 25 )

Awesome story! I don't play fnaf but I know absolutely everything about it. Anyway, sometimes as I'm reading or watching a video on my iPod (like right now) I look up and expect to see Freddy staring into my face lol. This made me even more afraid. Also whenever I walk out of my bathroom I see Bonnie's face in my wall. It changes between withered Bonnie, toy Bonnie, phantom Bonnie, shadow Bonnie and occasionally spring trap. Is that normal?

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Thanks for the fav.:rainbowdetermined2: and the game did stuff like that to me until I played a demo version. I think it's the demo not positive, if not it's a great place to start! Here's a link :raritywink: FNAF 2

5846079 welcome :twilightsmile: sadly though I can't play the game. My parents say it messes up my brain. But great story!

Hello! I came here because this story was submitted to multiple hate groups. (Truly a pious reason, I know.) However, I have to say that there are two reasons as to why it was submitted.

1. Anything involving FNAF seems to be downvotes on principle, with the flood of crossovers as of late.
2. The story is very short, leaving something to be desired. Also, you might want to work on your pacing.

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Thank you for you for the warnings. Maybe I should put out there that it was a random idea that just popped into my head. I decided to write it out for the FNAF fan girls (and boys) like myself.:ajsleepy: I am over obsessed.

Comment posted by Lunar Dusk deleted Apr 10th, 2015
Comment posted by Sapphire the Gem deleted Apr 10th, 2015

WOW that was the first FNAF fic I have read and it was pretty good.

I have to admit the "Mr. Ted" part made me giggle and the general story was fun.

8/10 great job.

I thank you for my enjoyment.

This is an interesting story. It's light, upbeat, and humorous. I'm not that good of a critic, so I can't really find anything negative to say. It doesn't make me laught out loud, but it does make me smile from amusement.

I can't play FNAF; (one time when I was babysitting I was a bit creeped out by the life-size teddy bears that the kids had.) I'm more interested in its backstory, and that's what I use for MY FNAF fanfics, but I do like the random story when I'm in a bad mood.

Okay, I keep sidetracking. All in all, it's a nice story and I am bad at saying exactly how. Sorry.
:facehoof:

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Thank you.:pinkiehappy: I have actually played the game demo a few times, I am also interested in the back story, it is very interesting.:trixieshiftleft:

Well THAT eskaleted Quickly. *sitcom lauth*

Comment posted by Aria Frickin Blaze deleted Jul 6th, 2015

Not Bad, Pretty good! Finally had a chance to read it. :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait to read more

I have a feeling she destroyed Mr Ted.:rainbowlaugh:

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That would probably make a very interesting sequel. :rainbowlaugh:

7275892 well , it does look a lot like Freddy , you should make a sequel , and I would definitely read it , because I'm interested now !:pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

6176067 like in I hope you die in a fire ?!?!:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

HAH
I like this
But hey,
I was wondering...
Could you do one with Bonnie VS Fluttershy, or something like that?
Also
smol bit of continuity I wanna point out;
Freddy runs on Possession, so small damage like cut wires wouldn't really do much.
You gotta straight up either burn him, rip out the power module, or shoot him in between the eyes.
Regardless, this does portray the Sirens pretty well, and I'd love to see a sequel.
Good on you, m8!
:rainbowlaugh:

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