A lone unicorn searches in a dream for her meaning.
"Who am I?"
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- Member Since 21st Jan, 2015
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Briarpelt
Sing a song, / A song of life / Lived without regret...
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Interesting concept!
I'm surprised there's not more views, but I think the description-heavy opening may have thrown some readers off. I wish we could have known more about the unicorn, I don't care what she looks like, but who she is, why she's doing this, what's this all about? Maybe that 's the point since that's what she's trying to find out. But whyyyy?? Who is she...
Seriously though, great descriptions, beautiful writing, no noticeable grammar or spelling issues, but I wish there had been more of a plot, just a bit more action, you know?
Nice stuff!
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Thanks for your feedback! The point of this story, for me, was mostly on creating a mood and a very clear image. I took a momentary flash of inspiration and tried to stretch it into 1,000 words--perhaps not the best idea, but it was good practice for writing settings.