“A children's story that can only be enjoyed by children is not a good children's story in the slightest.” - C.S. Lewis
This story is a sequel to The Baker and the Candy Loving Unicorn
Mission: to liberate the bonbons to Lyra Heartstrings.
Target: the small mountain of candy sitting on the counter.
Success rate: 100%
Or is it?
BonBon has made a fresh supply of candy and has laid them out to cool. However, enter Lyra Heartstrings, who wants to steal the candy right out from under BonBon's nose.
Will she succeed?
Now with a dramatic reading by scorpion1m:
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Ha! Great story, have my thumbs-up
5802928
Thanks! I honestly really enjoyed writing this story.
5803057 Yeah, It was pretty funny :D
Really nice!
5803077
Thanks!
Gonna level with ya, I was expecting laxative.
It was vegetables, I was expecting marijuana.
5805329
O.....K....
i've done a dramatic read on your fan- fic
5838542
Thanks!
i would have went with rocks painted chocolate color not veggies
But... This is a sequel to something!
5978744
This was the first story that I ever wrote and published on this site. At the time of publication, I had no plans to work with the idea any more.
I ended up writing the prequel after reading it myself and wanting to create a story from Bon Bon's perspective of Lyra stealing her candy.
Hope this helps.
5950739
If you recall, Bon Bon mentioned in the previous fic that they were both going on a diet.
Hence, she's also tricking her into sticking to the diet.
7525684 ya ya but im not a healthy eater ok
7526627
Neither am I.
Honestly, I just thought rocks painted to look like chocolate seemed a bit too harsh for this story. Maybe a Warner Brothers cartoon, but not this story.
What kind of relationship do they have?