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Wild Blaze


I´m new in this and very shy >///<

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We are living our lives
Abound with so much information

We're all trapped in a maze of relationships
Life goes on with or without you

That's what I believe in until...

"Thou art I, and I am thou...
From the sea of thy soul, I come...
From the very moment of my emergence, I have been a guiding light shed to illuminate thy path...

When I heard those words... my whole life changed completely and one day I will find my truth...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Like this prologue of yours... Life is a stranger and who acquires our presence around it. Recall your fallen, and remake your future. Life is not established by words, but indicated by our presence. Life is a phenomenon.

An update to this story, the grammar, vocabulary, comma, semicolon, and etcetera are misplace and inconsiderably silly in placement, and I propose to relocate without a notion change in your story, and please, create a larger perspective on the story...

I do like the momlestia.....

Calling it now spike's final persona is going to be Bahamut

Riz

What crossover is this if I may ask ?

Comment posted by Wild Blaze deleted Mar 16th, 2015

5744878 You know of the game called Shin megami tensei Persona ?

Not gonna lie, I am very skeptical of this story because it was added to Spilight and because of the non-spilight stories being added to this group for God knows what reason, I am very jaded to any new concepts that have been added for the lol's. So I must ask this if I am to continue checking up on this and future stories you write.

Is this a story with the intent of romantic shipping between Twilight Sparkle and Spike the Dragon?

5745992 oh yes indeed is a Spilight. So rest assured :moustache::heart::twilightsmile:

5746104 Thank you very much for replying and bless you for making a proper Spilight.

Riz

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5745762 Persona crossover ? Yes I know that

Interesting, though there is no real reason for Celestia to keep calling Spike, son. We already know that and she knows his name. This seriously needs an editor, I'll admit and more detail on how Spike and Twi got together, also how Spike got wings and you can never really have enough details. I like it, it's always great to see a Spike and Momlestia story and with the added Spilight, you have my attention, this just needs to be edited to be more clear and read better and it could turn into something rather impressive, I await more.

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