A pony awakens in a strange prison in a strange land with nothing except a few fleeting memories. But through the broken bars of the only window in his cell, he notices that the sun is fading and the air is chilling...
A pony awakens in a strange prison in a strange land with nothing except a few fleeting memories. But through the broken bars of the only window in his cell, he notices that the sun is fading and the air is chilling...
I'm surprised how well written this is. I hope you'll make some more soon.
5665722 Thank you!
Awesome!
I'm just a bit confused on how those afflicted guards died. Anyway keep it up.
5680434 Interesting, I thought I left enough clues on how they were killed.
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I still don't get it :P
5684870 Can you guess what is going on? I'm kind of interested to see what you actually got from this scene.
So in my simply simple mind he is being attacked. Then he is imagining the sun but it is covered by red as he's being attacked. He is confused why he is angry. He trys to open a door that is covered by a rune, all the while being attacked and when he opens it with his horn and suddenly all the guards die. So I'm thinking: What?
5684982 I guess I was too vague. Basically, what happens is that a good portion of it takes place in his mind. In his rage, he conjures a spell that blasts the guards. Thanks for the feedback tho!