This is the story of how a pony named Garden Rave, and the draconequus, Discord come together under some unusual circumstances. The one key thing they share? Their trapped by a demon that will destroy them for the sins they have committed. How does one escape from something that is chained to one?
Got inspiration from "Keepers of Discord", "Bride of Discord", and a video Dr. Wolf made on YouTube. Can't remember what it was about though. :/ I don't own any of the songs used in this fic, nor am I making money from them.
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It's an interesting idea. I strongly suggest you get an editor. The story's description even has some awkward wording and grammatical errors. This will turn many readers away before they even get to the story itself.
Adding music excerpts to a story can be tempting. In this case, your story only takes a few minutes to read, but includes a whole lot more music than that. Honestly, I don't bother listening to linked music. If you want to incorporate an audio experience into your story, consider doing it as a radio play or a dramatic reading, rather than a clumsy juxtaposition of someone else's music over your story.
Cool story. I'll be your editor if you want.
Thank you. Both of you! Though I'm taking another look at it and I'm starting to see that I might have to do more changing than I originally thought. Not sure how long that will take me. I'll ask if I can't find an editor, and figure out how to get out of this poetic groove I'm in with this thing.
Um... Garden Rave?