I'm not just reading. My stories have "idea" but no "form" or "function". I'm just an armored guy riding a Robot Dino-Dragon; fighting a dark paradox man thing. I don't remember if I'm a robot.
A new newspaper arrives in Ponyville, The Smelt Forge and one of the writers is Gabbygums. Though, if its not the CMC behind these articles... then who is?
Note: I made an alternate version. Its the exact same story, but edited by a website. Let me know which one is better, ok?
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Spelling mistakes, ends too sudden...
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Couldn't help the spelling mistakes, but the sudden ending was on purpose.
Grammar is okay, but... why the flying feather did you suddenly start talking in poetry? It makes no sense. It's just confusing and, frankly, lame.
Why are you calling Scootaloo an "anvil"?
More poetry? WHY?!
Why the pegasus racism? That's like saying all Spanish people are idiots.
My main criticism for the entire story is... why?
Why did Featherweight do it?
Why did you even write this?!
It's just a strange mish-mash of sudden events and random fourth-wall breakage, not to mention blatant earth pony and pegasus discrimination. Unicorns are cool and all, but they're not necessarily superior!
You can do better, man. I know you can.