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Jake Witt


I'm not just reading. My stories have "idea" but no "form" or "function". I'm just an armored guy riding a Robot Dino-Dragon; fighting a dark paradox man thing. I don't remember if I'm a robot.

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2021 Update. New Sonic writing project.
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Sonic has nothing to do, Doctor Eggman is in jail, everything is like yesterday, heck, the canyons he trains at are nothing new! Well, good thing a hole in space-time sweeps Sonic into a new adventure in a pony land!
Unlock friends, foes, vehicles, and items!
See here for characters.
See here for gear.
Meet the Mane Six!
Meet Sonic the Hedgehog... twice! And help him rescued himself!
Meet Sonic's friends and rivals! ... and siblings?!
Discover secret factions Sonic will probably not learn about!
Discover secret groups Amy will find!
And who is the villain behind Time Eater?

Explore Equestria to save it from being erased and colorless with the help of the Elements of Harmony ponies.

Explore Canterlot High as you try to stop three teenage girls from ruling the world with the power of music! Why does that sound familiar?


This story has canon and past canon characters. i.e. Sonic's siblings from Sonic Underground.
All OCs are slightly altered versions of regular characters and are altered for plot convenience... or just because of Shadow.


WARNING: VILLAINS MIGHT NOT BE KID FRIENDLY. THAT IS WHY "TEEN" IS ON THERE.
I am not consistent in these things above.
There's also secret chapters you can access with the code: Shard the Metal Sonic.

Chapters (68)
Comments ( 93 )

What the fuck...

Imaging just pitch black,

Bad Jake! BAD! *slaps your wrist with a ruler* No, no!

"Don't you mean 'when' are you?"

That's it! You're grounded!

All in all, the story just seems so insane and fast-paced. With a little more editing and descriptions, though, this could be the start of something ridiculously grand. I do like the basic plot- Sonic is bored, suddenly lands in Equestria- but the unnecessary(and sometimes incorrect) character descriptions annoy me to the point of wanting to dislike this. Few people read crossovers of things they don't know about and expect the writer to fully describe the characters. It's a SonicxMLP crossover! People know what Sonic characters look like! If you're really concerned about the more obscure characters, add pictures of them in the author's note!

some weird pegacorn

That is the last straw! I'm calling the cops!

The story is getting a bit more interesting, though. I like where you're going with it.

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Amy actuallt IS a hedgehog... unless the games, comics, and wikis are wrong...

5583084 Wait, but in every game I've played, she's called a cat... but I did just look it up, and she's a hedgehog...

Sonic, Y U so confusing?!

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Odd. I wonder what Sonic game says that? tbh I don't have all of the games... :twilightblush:

5583279 I don't know, to be honest, because when I was little we had three different Sonic games. We got rid of two and we kept Sonic Adventure 2 Battle/Sonic Battle Adventure 2/Sonic Adventure Battle 2, which doesn't mention Amy too much(I usually skip the cut scenes). I apologize for my faulty memory, you can come out of your room now.

Gonna be honest... I cant figure out whats going on in this story... Maybe chapter 2...

5583424 No. This is. *slaps you multiple times*

Okay, I lied. THIS is what freedom feels like. *gives you a koala*

HOW TO WRITE AT LEAST SOMEWHAT DECENT SONIC FANFICTION FOR DUMMIES:

Step 1: Read this. Sonic and Rainbow Dash: Endless Possiblity

Step 2: Tell the "No Originality Brigade" to go jump in a lake, or better yet, an ocean... far, far away from here.

Sonic has nothing to do, Doctor Eggman is in jail, everything is like yesterday, heck, the canyons he trains at are nothing new! Just then a hole in time sweeps Sonic into a new adventure!
Meet the Mane Six!
Meet Sonic the Hedgehog... twice!
Meet Sonic's friends and rivals! ... and siblings?!
And who is the bad guy behind Time Eater?

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I thought that Boom! Sonic is from an alternate universe!

So, Caliburn had a run-in with Dovahshy?

I think the reason why Amy's chasing after Sonic is that she's blind without contacts. I like that headcanon.

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He is from an alternate universe. In the game canon, but not too sure about Archie canon.

Knuckles has degenerated into a muscle-bound moron.

<--- If anybody can tell me who made this image that would be great.

Um, how about you look it up yourself? There is a thing called reverse searching.

Sonic has nothing to do, Doctor Eggman is in jail, everything is like yesterday,

Mind explaining what "yesterday" is?

Well, good thing a hole in space-time sweeps Sonic into a new adventure in a pony land!

Like every Sonic fic on here. Random portal sends him there.

Unlock friends, foes, vehicles, and items!

This is a fanfic, not a video game.

Meet the Mane Six!

We already know who they are, being a MY LITTLE PONY FANFIC SITE!

Meet Sonic the Hedgehog... twice! And help him rescued himself!

Wait, is this past tense or present? Because "rescued" implies it's past.

Meet Sonic's friends and rivals! ... and siblings?!

What, he's totally not going to self insert himself as Sonic's long lost brother, would he?

And who is the villain behind Time Eater?

Who's Time Eater?

5644664 Shame this requires knowledge of the Sonic series to understand...

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1.) Never heard of Reverse Searching.
2.) Have you ever been to school? What is different besides classes? School, Hallway, Lunch, Hallway, then go home.
In Sonic's case, its like an endless Summer.
3.) Portal? Cool story bro, TIME TRAVEL.
4.) Rescued. Past tense on purpose.
5.) Is Sonic the Hedgehog a video game character?
6.) Have you ever read the back of a video game?
7.) I will be hauling Sonic characters by the truck load when I'm done!
8.) In Sonic: Underground an (80's?) TV show he is a prince with a brother and sister who fight with the power of music, like Rainbow Rocks.
In Sonic Generations a game that show cases 20 years of Sonic. There is a creature Dr. Eggman finds after Sonic Colors that destroys time.

Thank you for questioning me. Now let's consider our words.

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Are you fucking autistic? This story is clearly for sonic fans, you sperglord faggot, so I'd you don't like it, get out, you faggotty ass "reviewer".

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I like what you are doing, but you're not only doing it wrong. Also I take a tiny bit offence to it. I'm borderline autistic. Aspergers, to be exact.

Fun Fact: Robin Williams, Einstein, Bill Gates, (probably Thomas Jefferson, but this hasn't been discovered yet to confirm it), the creators of Pokémon and Charlie Brown, and a longer list of famous people have aspergers.
http://www.disabled-world.com/artman/publish/article_2086.shtml

Plus "faggot" means bundle of sticks. One stick is weak, but a bundle of sticks are strong. "Friendship is Magic" here so you just complemented him... I think. Anyway, whether you were defending me or just making a point: treat others like you treat yourself. My life at school is crap because I have a history of acting like crap and treating others like crap.

Please, consider my words.

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Looks like somebody is feeling a little *inhales*:yay:shiiiiitaaaaaay!

What? I thought you like Cream. Oh wait... wrong fic.:rainbowlaugh:

No just no sorry but no
SONIC AS A GRIFFIN
(btw if im wrong, im sorry, i just started reading and commented in the middle of the story)

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That gives me an idea. Poison joke.
Big Sonic goes from cool hedgehog to angry griffin and Little Sonic becomes too lazy to run.
If I did that, how would that sound?

Wait! Angry Griffon or "#thedress" Sonic? Is he blue wearing black or white wearing gold? Which is better?

WARNING: VILLAINS ARE NOT KID FRIENDLY. THAT IS WHY "TEEN" IS ON THERE.

"Its name is Blood-Drenched Terrors..."

In case you're wondering: yes that was Tom, Boulder's big brother that tried to crush Sonic's little group when the entered Saddle Arabia.

You probably loved that cameo. :trollestia: Wasn't he guarding the clone pool? :facehoof:

Was that last paragraph still Metal Sonic?

Are you autistic? Serious question. :applejackunsure:

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Yes I am. Read below in the comments. Its fairly obvious. (You will get "fairly instead of fairly" soon if you did that. Just look for a guy named Black Night in the comments and my response.)

Hey Everyone! I Friggin' Called It!

Sonic is bored without Dr. Eggman, but instead of being depressed like in this story: he becomes an ADHD wreck! (Sonic BOOM! Episode: "Aim Low")

Not sure if want... Why do the most mediocre writers have the best ideas, and the best writers have the most mediocre ideas? :applejackunsure:

Did anyone access the extra chapter? aka the Metal Sonic timeline?

great chapter:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

i especially liked how they tricked Amy:rainbowlaugh:

keep up the good work:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

This has gone from serious to completely random.

Guys! Guys! Who wants to have Muttski as a side character. I read up on him and lmfao!

Originally he was Sonic's pet dog, as we know.
Now he's Ben "The Mutt" Muttski, Uncle Chuck's apprentice and family friend around Tails's age. If both Muttskis were in Ponyville...

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