A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Nice chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.
I think that should be "was", since he didn't bring this up with Twilight before.
"her".
I think some words are missing there.
I think that should be "Shining, Barrier finally stopped, a wide grin on his face."
I think "was" should be deleted.
First, that should be "rest", and second, that should be "princesses".
See my previous note.
And you'll want to delete that extra "l".
5565019 Done, done, and thanks. :)
It's spelled ma'am, not mam. (Just as a note.)
As Alti said, it should be was.
She didn't take THAT very calmly, I assume.
.... ah really like his mane?
Last chapter, I thought it was only an expression that is commonly used in those strange English speaking countries, but now, the only thing I can do is shake my head (unless it's a 'magical' characteristic of the Equestrian lands, for which I would be very sorry then) : It is simply impossible for Barrier to be the great grandfather of Night Light. There isn't even a hint of a doubt, and that for a very simple reason : I can't believe that over the course of a freaking thousand years, ponykind only produced 3 generations. For an example, in the Middle Age, you only needed 60-75 years to 'make' that many generations. So let's say that for the ponies, reproduction happens every 35 years (which was already considered 'to be old' 500 years back). 1000 : 35 = 28.57 . So that would mean that Mister Light Night here is Barrier's (more or less) great great great great great great great great (+20 more 'great') grandson. Moreover, after that much genetic mixing, I doubt that a DNA test would be worth anything. It would be like saying : "Hey there, stranger, did you know that I am your cousin 37 times removed? I have a DNA test here that I have made myself using toothpaste and acid proclaiming that we have a 3 % accordance!"
Wow, Equestria was different back then...
while I am new to this story line I can say with out a douth this story and the sequel is worthy keeping a vary close eye on.
Ah, it's good to revisit this story. I'm confident that this chapter was the one that convinced me to see this story to the end; because of the comedy that's blended with the drama.
If the author's note says to....here's a shoe I guess? *half-heartedly throws a sneaker at the author*
Princess of Love here! Don't make a sex joke unless you're prepared for it to backfire.
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That had me crying tears of laughter