A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Oh the horror, the horror! At Changeling-Alicorn Hybrid I was like, "hmm, strange but I've heard worse." At Hunter from WoW I'm like "NOPE!" for the love of god no! Too much OP!
5712560 I'm sort of trying to trade it off as he has little to no control [levitation is about it] over his magic, since the energy used by unicorns wasn't native to Azeroth. :3
5712580 I apologize in advance for when I inevitably let you down.
I really like this. An interesting take on the "1000 years" bit, though I'm sad Barrier doesn't do more reactions to the few advances in technology around Equestria. His meeting with the Elements will be glorious, however.
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alright, pony/changeling hunter... maybe I buy it. I'd like to see the demented night elf that though "hey let's teach the sentient horse creature how to wield a bow with hooves, and to kill the cute woodland creatures for no nutritional value." A changeling monarch might also make sense. Chrysalis: "OH no, A Royal egg. Quick throw it into the nearest chaos rift." But changeling hybrids should not be something just randomly done. Changelings are a whole other race from whatever is being hybrhybridized. so there should be a ton of problems with cross species reproduction. then there's the problem with alicorn hybrids, Alicorns arnt necessarily a race by themselves, they are a mix of the three pony tribes. and you want to arbitrarily add a 4th. Why not have him be a Timber Lycan or part demon while your at it.
But seriously as outlandish as this sounds, if done well this could be an interesting story. but from the tagline alone I would not touch it with a ten foot pole.
5712688 Mm, well lemme email you the little ideas page I have on it. If you have time or are a glutton for punishment [I know I am] give it a once over. Honestly, any input, good or bad given on it gives me a chub.
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uhhg, stop flirting with me you're going to make my wife jealous. she doesn't understand my obsession with reading fanfiction and complaining about the authors story decisions.
5712720 Uh, tell her it's a perfectly platonic chub.
5712734 Thank you for your feedback - it's greatly appreciated and I'll try to take it into account for future stories. Best of luck in your reading mate. Cheers. <3
ROFL the author's notes... :P
Always nice to see a new update. :3
5713379 Not my fault they kept trying to run. I kept telling them if they tried to flee I'd chain them to the floor. Maybe next time they'll listen.
5716275 You have no idea how much good it did me to read your comment. I've been stupid-paranoid that it's not moving at the right pace or that I'll screw something up on it. It's certainly not as easy to write as I had first expected it.
5714350 Afraid I don't know that room number.
5716681 Chains are good persuasion.