A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Man, this was a really fun chapter to edit. Though I am a bit sad we had to cut out Barrier's threesome with Octavia and Spitfire.
....well that was quick...GUYS WE NEED A WEDDING.....ehhh...AGAIN
Ah. So Barrier didn't have to threaten the Council. Luna did it for him because she agrees shit is fucking worthless with them unless someone who knows how to be a real guard is commanding them.
It's an interesting story. But this chapter is a bit weird. Ether you could have build the final scene more or cut MB handling the 'guard'. I think you down too much the royal guard it feel like there are really useless when they probably already handle the citizen panicking with Nightmare Moon and Discord.
This chapter was great. I loved the story so far. I hope the see the epilogue and the extrac chapter you've planed.
I think there's an erased paragraph between Vinyl imagining Octavia dropping Chrysalis and asking why Barrier did it.
I think and epilogue chapter will be great. Thanks for having barrier pull his weight when it was needed the most. This story was awesome.
5912848 Ah good catch, thank you. Forgot to change that bit up. I'll taze my editors. :3
5913105 Hey, don't blame me when gdocs screws up!
great chapter
Great chapter and thanks for the story it was a wonderful trip!
5916518 When you devour as many live chickens and live in waste as long as I've been forced to, you develop immunities and recover from all sorts of things.
"Ponies of Equestria i see in your eyes the fear that would take the heart of me a day may come when the kindness of ponies fails and we forsaken our friends and break all bonds of loyalty but it ain't this day an hour of haters and broken hearts when the age of ponies comes crashing down but it ain't this day this day we love and tolerate by all that ya'll hold dear on Equestria i bid you stand ponies of the west"
I see what you did there... You had it planned all along since the beginning. You are a genius XD
Strange things can happen during a fight with a changeling queen.
Loved it!
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And it’s still there after all these years. That was some revenge spell!