A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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A great story, thank you
Was only following the story, but fave'd it now. Also, following you. I like this story & universe a lot, and I am anxious for the sequel.
Gotta love how pragmatic Barrier is XD
Found it, read it, loved every word!
5916835 That was bad and you should feel bad. :)
Huzzah!!
I wonder what happen to Sombra. Nice epilogue and crazy filly
5916966 Eh to each their own. I don't claim that he's a particularly great character by any means, nor the writing terribly wonderful. Was my first non-school related piece of writing, so I expect some people to be less-than-fond of him. In any case, thanks for giving it a glance.
5917067 I liked the concept as I said earlier, but I read stories for the protagonist and how he/she appeals to me, so meh XD
5917328 missed the 'n' key
Just a suggestion, but I would put that entire letter into a quote format.
5917911 I generally run my editors ragged so a miss here and there {everywhere} wouldn't surprise. I keep tazing them but they don't work faster.
5917943 What can I say, being electrified tends to make us hit the wrong keys!
5918065 Excuses.
Thank you for this story. I saw it grow from the first chapter into something I couldn't stop reading. Thank you again.
- TheMisterBold
5919048 Mm, not that I can recall. I did mean to replace the period after 'light up' with a semi-colon though, so that might be it. Good catch on the second one; fixed and thank you. :3
5918624 And thank you. It's the readers that gave me the drive to come this far.
5918070 Fixed, thank you. :)
Skipped over quite a bit right there in these last two chapters. I can kindof infer what happened to Whistler, and you did go ahead and outline what happened to Verdent....were there any other prisoners? You didn't say at all.
Anyway. Excellent story, I quite like it.
5920200 Just those two and a lot of bodies. :3
"Hey, little Sparkle, say 'Daddy' 'Da-ddy'!"
"A-nal"
6032923 I neither confirm nor deny.
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6054758 We'll see. :)
6056299
Fair enough. Thanks.
6147513 You will be disappointed good sir and for that, I apologize.
6165673 I put it there since the clop takes place mid-chapter or so, in case anyone wanted to read it then and there rather than having to scroll down or up to access the chapter. Was going to be it's own fic but...bleh.
6054758 I'm getting the impression that you really don't want a sequel, like really opposed to even the idea of a sequel, at least that's the vibe I'm getting.
but in all seriousness this is a brilliant fic and you should be proud of it.
6202206 Right? Very nearly drove me to not write the sequel.
Glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate your words - they do me more good than people realize. Currently writing an alternate/retelling of this story in addition to the sequel. Hope you'll enjoy that one as well. :3
Hoping to make it a sort of "what I've learned" example. :3