A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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5632275 Funny you should mention that. ;) It may or may not be addressed a few more chapters in. :)
And here end the story of Barrier. I mean he killed two ponies, the self defence excuse don't make you innocent, especially if he attacked the guards just after. Having the ponies just injuried would have enought to have in in jail the time the guard sort out his story.
Otherwise it's an interesting story
You might want to put that author's note at the start of the chapter, rather than at the end. Some people might rather having the heads up before they read though the scene.
In other news; it was just as impressive as I expected. Three ponies taken out without much effort? All part of being a Captain of the Guard from Equestria's darker periods.
5632471 Shite, forgot all about putting AN at the top, thanks for that. x.x
I used to be a killer, like you. But then I took a horn in the knee.
Ah, I love battle sequences. Very nicely written with a well-kept pace.
So, i liked the chapter more than the other chapters just because the battle scene, that you wrote very good by the way. So please conntinue.
I don't know wether to make a Solar Flare joke(DBZ) or a Flash joke(Pokémon). Hmmm.........
Magic Barrier used Flash! It's Super effective!
He also used Fake Out and it too was Super effective.
I would make an HM01 joke but that's just too brutal.
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Well if you don't know whether to do a solar flare joke or a flash joke then do both combine them do a flash solar flare joke