A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Once again, interesting direction this is taking.
i arrived before anyone else!!
Nice chapter, but there's a few things you may want to edit.
That should be "them".
That should be "unicorn's".
You're missing a quotation mark at the end and sure that "bent" is the right word.
And that "tea".
5604809 Done, done, and done, thanks again. :3
If you ever want to proofread for me full-time I wouldn't complain. ;)
5604841 Sure thing, I edit other stories all the time.
A bit of tension is always good, but impersonating Shining Armour might bite him in the backside.
5604841 “Unhoove me!” Octavia finally jerked her hoof away as they entered the streets of Canterlot once more; the five ponies had disappeared.
“Unhoof me!” Octavia finally jerked her hoof away as they entered the streets of Canterlot once more; the five ponies had disappeared.
Not sure if it should be unhoof or unhoove
I see old habits die hard with ol' Barrier here. (As if the cuddled whiskey bottle wasn't a hint .)
Can't blame him too hard for being wary of thestrals, when his last memory of them was facing them as adversaries during the Lunar War.